I think what you’ve done in the way of modeling is very nice. I feel as though you porportions are way off though. This may be the look you were trying to achieve so disregard this if that is the case.
- Head is to small for the rest of the body.
- Waist is way to high. Hip bones represent the mid point of the body.
- Hands are to large.
- Legs and feet are to large.
- Torso height is to short based off the rest of the body.
Also, you’ve done a decent job of it but breaking up the symetry in the cloth folds can be improved. Especially in the lower waist area. Offsetting these details will add in making him more dynamic. Adding detailed textures and improving the lighting will bring him to life.