Hi everybody! 
Here is my latest piece of work. Im not sure wether to call it “Obsession of the Vampirism” or if i should call it something else. Its basically a person insanely obsessed with the idea of being a vampire he starts to act like one. (He’s really not a vampire)
Ehh… yah.
Anywhoo… i would like to recieve some feedback on this image from you people 
Thanks
Cheers! :wavey:
[edit] I felt i had to do some slight changes. Im sorry about that. The pic above is the new one [/edit]
Very good render!:buttrock:
I think it needs more blood around the mouth and on the neck…
…:eek:
Very good work!
Tchô!
he looks more shocked and scared than angry, which is good, if hes only a vampire wannabe
the lightings great 
He looks scared and somewhat funny
Needs hair may be
The blood is texture I guess…thats why getting the purple highlights… the blood part should look more wet and slimy…perhaps dripping a lot from corner of his mouth etc
IMO greenish yellow eyes dont go with him
Nice wannabe vampire anyway 
the lighting needs to be more rough… its all way to soft to look scary… try to put the light from below… we are used to see light coming from above so if the light comes from below it makes us uncomfortable (old and cheesy but very good horror movie trick)
He’s disgusting alright.
Perhaps the veins at his right eye is a bit to “bumped”
Otherwise, he looks just like you :applause:
Face proportions is good, tho you could bring up the up the ears a bit. You could bring the eyebrows down in the middle for some more evilness, looks a bit like “say aaaaaah”. He looks a bit unaware of what he is doing. You got a real good tearduct on that eye which most ppl miss.
Glad påsk freddan, im gonna go get sober, bahbye…
really good modeling,but i think you should change the eyebrow to be more realistic…maybe delete them why not and add more frightened eyes
But the blood effect and the head is wonderfully made!!
I made him more angry and stuff. I hope you like the update. I didn’t mean to have to update him since i honestly thought i was finished, but shit happens when you’re picky and stuff XD.
Feel free to post comments 
Me thinks his teeth are a little too perfect, they look like white popsicle sticks, other than that, thats one scary fella.
I think the teeth would look alot better if a few of them were a bit crooked, or at least not perfectly straight.
man, thats a sick image, I think I’ll barf now.
Great looking model and skin shading! He looks very fleshy, so well done there
I think one of the main things that sticks out as a bit odd is his lack of eyebrows - you should consider adding some.
Also, try adding more wrinkles to him, either by modeling some, or even bump mapping/displacement. When a person pulls that kind of facial expression, they are going to have a lot more wrinkles in their skin, particularly at the top of the nose and the corners of the eyes, where the skin bunches up.
I personally like the lighting and I think it goes really well with the skin shading. The eyes look a little glassy but perhaps that actually suits the creepiness of the character.
Good work!
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