Character: Mummy

#1

Hey everyone,

I been working on this piece.
Its my 3rd piece upto now so please give comments, suggestions tips etc

Thanks

Sorry if its a little big

#2

do u think so?

#3

With more time i think so yes, but i want to start working on the Machine Flesh Challenge so just thought id post what i had.

#4

Okay, go off and work on your next project; but give a bit of thought to your anatomy rendering in this piece, and how you can use the bandages/wrappings to show the volume of the body inside them. That kind of thinking will help your next render as well.

#5

Nice start but you need to wort on anatomy as keight said already. The right hand is way too small. When you hold your
hand in the camera the hand should be bigger then the head
or at least the same size.

The bandages look flat. Try to draw them rounder.

try to make a quick simple sketch first to optimize your
proportions. Take some pose references.

Hope this helps!

#6

His mouth is a little far from his chin,it looks strange~~~~

#7

Hah dunno why but i never noticed that until u said it :stuck_out_tongue: strange

#8

Nice job but it’s more sinple Ithink,it could be ameliorated.:thumbsup:

#9

Nice use of words there DoDo-Ben :wink:

#10

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