character: ipod girl


#2

Very nice I love the lighting. Girl looks very comfortable and into her music. Nice job.


#3

You should spend another 5 hours, well meybe just 3 hours (:-)) painting to adjust the contrast (becouse there is to litle of it) and gradation (more gradation needed) and it will be a great picture for someones room poster,

hope this helps…:thumbsup:


#4

looking great

but her mouth is a bit odd, looks a doll’s mouth

nice work though:thumbsup:


#5

i love the lighting… done very well… and her pose is good… :slight_smile:


#6

I love it! Looks like a girl for me :slight_smile:

The only minor things I’ve noticed are her right hand; It’s looking kinda weird.
The other thing is the edge of the bed. It looks a bit too sharp, like it’s not anti aliased :smiley:

Other than that it’s loooking very very good IMO!:thumbsup:


#7

Very nice.
Korekoso hikarito kage desune.
Sankouni narimasu.
Sorewa souto bokumo iPod hoshiinaa.


#8

I llike it very much. It has a very nice feel to it.

Why didn’t came my iPod with a girl like that…


#9

thnx everyone! I’m glad you like it!

animquer:
Thnx! This was supposed to be a speedpaint so this is
the original resolution of the pic :cry:
While I was painting I went more and more into detail.
So I don’t think that I will spend more time on this.

Man:
Maybe the lips are too dark. I’ll try to lighten them up.

FeRdI:
Indeed I didn’t realize that edge thing. I’ll fix it!
I’ll check the right hand also. Thnx for your crits!

Sousuke:
Arigatou gozaimasu!
Konkaiwa shirokuro de charenji shimashita.

Pibre3d:
yeah:) they would sell much more iPods


#10

OK I just fixed the edge of the bed, did some work on the right hand and made the lips brighter.


#11

cool stuff man! It’s original on b/w.

This was supposed to be a speedpaint so this is
the original resolution of the pic
While I was painting I went more and more into detail.
So I don’t think that I will spend more time on this.

Don’t worry! I have the same probleme. I’m so concentred on my work than I put more and more details…and the work and work is almost finished! :blush:

besides it is very beautiful and that gives freshness

:thumbsup:


#12

I love the way she looks relaxed, nice catched. Too bad the resolution isn’t too high. Very lovely.


#13

thnx!

Garma:
I recently started to create daily paintings. Everyday at least
one picture. So I draw in very small resolutions. Too bad…
I’m posting them on www.sijun.com under speedpaints btw.


#14

realy very good picture Goro :slight_smile:
i like her expression. quite relaxed somehow.
there is something strange with the crossed legs.
i dont know what exactly it is but the shading looks wrong on some places. plus im not sure if the shape is all correct there.
nonenthless a very good pic :thumbsup:


#15

Sweet picture :smiley: love the pose she is laid out in and the lighting. very good speedpaint this:D
love,
Omen:applause:


#16

OrcOyoyo:
oops your right! The shape is not correct indeed…I see also
the shading problem. Maybe I’ll fix it. Thnx for your crits!

omengeorge:
Thnx! I’m glad you like it!


#17

Her right hand and looks odd to me; seems too far of an outward angle… or maybe her arm angle is too inward? Not sure. The pose itself is good; she has a nice expressive gesture. Lighting is well done too. Nice speedpaint.


#18

really nice … and great light


#19

thnx guys!


#20

I like ur idea of showing the model half in shade and half lit with sun shine.
Did u color it latter?


#21

nice girl … :drool: (sweet :p)

and i really like the lightning. very realistic, pal.