i love the lighting… done very well… and her pose is good… 
character: ipod girl
I love it! Looks like a girl for me
The only minor things I’ve noticed are her right hand; It’s looking kinda weird.
The other thing is the edge of the bed. It looks a bit too sharp, like it’s not anti aliased 
Other than that it’s loooking very very good IMO!
Sousuke
#7
Very nice.
Korekoso hikarito kage desune.
Sankouni narimasu.
Sorewa souto bokumo iPod hoshiinaa.
Pibre3d
#8
I llike it very much. It has a very nice feel to it.
Why didn’t came my iPod with a girl like that…
Goro
#9
thnx everyone! I’m glad you like it!
animquer:
Thnx! This was supposed to be a speedpaint so this is
the original resolution of the pic 
While I was painting I went more and more into detail.
So I don’t think that I will spend more time on this.
Man:
Maybe the lips are too dark. I’ll try to lighten them up.
FeRdI:
Indeed I didn’t realize that edge thing. I’ll fix it!
I’ll check the right hand also. Thnx for your crits!
Sousuke:
Arigatou gozaimasu!
Konkaiwa shirokuro de charenji shimashita.
Pibre3d:
yeah:) they would sell much more iPods
Goro
#10
OK I just fixed the edge of the bed, did some work on the right hand and made the lips brighter.
picksel
#11
cool stuff man! It’s original on b/w.
This was supposed to be a speedpaint so this is
the original resolution of the pic
While I was painting I went more and more into detail.
So I don’t think that I will spend more time on this.
Don’t worry! I have the same probleme. I’m so concentred on my work than I put more and more details…and the work and work is almost finished! 
besides it is very beautiful and that gives freshness
Garma
#12
I love the way she looks relaxed, nice catched. Too bad the resolution isn’t too high. Very lovely.
Goro
#13
thnx!
Garma:
I recently started to create daily paintings. Everyday at least
one picture. So I draw in very small resolutions. Too bad…
I’m posting them on www.sijun.com under speedpaints btw.
OrcOYoyo
#14
realy very good picture Goro
i like her expression. quite relaxed somehow.
there is something strange with the crossed legs.
i dont know what exactly it is but the shading looks wrong on some places. plus im not sure if the shape is all correct there.
nonenthless a very good pic
omengeorge
#15
Sweet picture love the pose she is laid out in and the lighting. very good speedpaint this:D
love,
Omen:applause:
Goro
#16
OrcOyoyo:
oops your right! The shape is not correct indeed…I see also
the shading problem. Maybe I’ll fix it. Thnx for your crits!
omengeorge:
Thnx! I’m glad you like it!
Polygon_Origami
#17
Her right hand and looks odd to me; seems too far of an outward angle… or maybe her arm angle is too inward? Not sure. The pose itself is good; she has a nice expressive gesture. Lighting is well done too. Nice speedpaint.
Rameez
#20
I like ur idea of showing the model half in shade and half lit with sun shine.
Did u color it latter?
Riddick
#22
Lovely picture.
There is maybe too much details on the face, regarding of the rest of the picture.
But it is really great.
Goro
#23
Rameez:
I didn’t colorize it. It was just a lightvalue study.
cr0ss: thnx!
Riddick:
Thnx It’s an honor for me to get a post form you!
I agree about the face. Thnx for your crit!