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Hi,
I want to make modifications to this character:
-to let finished the modelling work to get a prety head from all angles,
-and to improve texture work to give her a realistic touch
Crits and suggestions to get this will be very wellcome.
Software used: 3dx max
This is the look she have now. Following suggestions I modified the nose, (too much plane before), and the mouth.
Other angles,
What do you think? Worst or better?
I think it’s great!
Only real problem i can see is her ears! Look kinda big.
And the eye outer surface (cornea?) looks a bit too much reflective.
Besides that, looks preety amazing to me! Good work!
Hi,
Thanks Q_B.
I was dubious about the reflectivity; and the ears, don´t know, you are the first telling me that. Will have it in mind.
Yep u’r in the right way!
Still think the ears r a bit big, but may be just me … still, u need to make some creases on them … i mean it’s too much flat?
The eye is better now!
Very good work! Congrats!
Work on eyes. They are more reflective and glossy. Also something wrong with chin and ears.
Good work.
Can we see the textures for the hair? Im trying to model hair in a similar way. I think you have really got the hair down pat…
Thanks for three last posts with comments. They are a great help for me, really.
Q_B, I thought that too, that the face is too flat. I have tried sometimes to fix it but it was resulting in a not so much pretty face as I want.
Storman, thanks as well.
As for hair, some forum members in the finished work section asked me to tell something about it. So check this thread by wednesday I you will find something about it. Thanks tessalated.
Do you think Niki she is more pretty in blond? Good to know. Thanks.
Some body shots:
I want to make changes based on crits received, but first want to fix a problem to apply my body joints deformations to move the character.
I know how to use them in an animation with the Skin modifier in 3ds max, using joints deformations as Morph angle deformers.
But don´t know how to keep them as settings to use every time. This is what I´d like to do.
I don´t like envelopes in Character Studio. It would be fine if it supported morphing, but as far as I know it doesn´t.
If anyone can give a hand with this…
The front hip area needs work (the hip-bone needs to stick out a bit), and the torso is a bit too long. The same is true for the arms, but it is really just a little, so it is hard to notice.
The lower legs also seem a tiny bit to short compared to the upper legs, but you might as well leave it that way… not all women come with perfect legs 
Overall a really good mesh 
Thanks a lot for your crits. But… well… I did use references.
Anyway, I´ll check them again.
U’r doin a great job here.
I won’t get into detailed crits on the body anathomy, cos i sure ain’t xpert on that … er … i mean in 3d … whatever.
About the hair, those strands over her face look stylish, but i think they throw away whatever realism u achieved. (lack of shadows perhaps?)
And the ears … still think they need some more definition. But, since they’r covered up with hair, its no big deal.
Congrats alot!
Hi Q_B,
Thanks for reply. I think that too about the hair. Maybe hair shadows should be more noticiable, as well this kind of hair is not very realistic, but I don´t like the idea of using photografic textures.
it looks like the lower eyelid is on the same line with the upper eyelid , which is wrong.
