hi !
this is my latest female-W.I.P christy - pls write some c&c’s 
i know theres something to tweak like brows and lashes and the hair… but it would be nice if you write more about the geometry !
modeled and rendered with cinema 4d xl 7.3.
regards
valentine 
p.s. sry for that bad english
Hey, looks pretty good…I’d say that the geometry looks clean…and besides the shocked look on her face I say everything looks fine 
You should post a wire if you want people to make more comments about the geometry.
I’m surprised you haven’t had more responses. I agree you’ll have to post wire to get geometry feedback. We need more angles as well.
All I could really say from this would be to maybe take in the creases on the sides of the nose a bit more. Shape of the eyes is a little strange, perhaps add some more variation so that the eyelids actually look like they’re wrapping around a sphere not so smooth all the way across, looks like they’re being pulled on the sides; that’s kinda what makes her look surprised.
This is a pretty good piece so far. The texture is looking nice although obviously a bit symmetrical
I’d prefer a little thicker eyebrows, just my opinion.
looks good her eyes really let down ure work tho sadly. there way too white and not at all real, polish up here eyes a bit and uve a nice model there!
Looks good, you can see the line between her face texture and the scalp…but im assuming your putting hair so that wont be visible…besides that it looks great.
hey - thx for your c&s’s 
here are some wires and renderings without textures and cameralightning - perhaps u now can criticize better
so pls make some c&cs. thx !
regards
jannis
p.s. @ polyester: heheh - the texture isnt symetric, but theres a symetricalobject that flips the texture
heres a little update of my christy-model -> write some c&c’s, pls !
(texture is still flipped; no lashes and the brows are still a bit crappy, too)
regards
jannis
Neat model! Great texturing! Did you paint 'em yourself? There is a line running down the top of her forehead… that looks kinda strange. What kind of lighting did you use?
the texture is a mixture of a photo and some painting and photoshopwork. the “strange” line is the end of the uv-map
i think the lighting has to be tuned ! atm there are only three lights: back-, fill- and keylight… what bugs me is that cinema 4d has no sss - so i cant get realistic looking skin ;/
jannis
Hmmm… I’ve never used SSS. Can it really make skin look realistic? I have seen 3D studio max’s SSS and that one didn’t look too good. G2 for lightwave is good, but I dunno… but I have never used it, so I wouldn’t know the full capabilities of it. Oh and the lighting set up does look odd, lol, but its better than mine 
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