Character: Anime: Ninja Girl

#1

one of my first manga character done with photoshop 7 & mouse

#2

… worst anatomy … is this a sword behind ? … but i like expression …:slight_smile:

#3

Your posts generally don’t help much.

Personally I think its very true to the anime/manga style and love it. Great work. Only crit is that if the sword is on her back add a bit of detail so its not looking like a background element.

#4

That’s pretty good with just mouse, I can’t draw jack with the mouse =) Get rid of lense flare, don’t ever ever touch lense flare, it’s evil! If you want some metalic shine effect, draw it by hand =)

#5

ok…evil lensflare… got it… what about filters ? :blush:

@perfecti … eh uhm thx

@MrPunkin the sword is that black coz its the evil sword of darkness and its made of shadows… :thumbsup:

#6

Ah, good, now that you explain it there is no need to make any changes:thumbsup:

#7

i think it looks really good… and for a job done with mouse… well its excellent…

#8

i like it a lot. but you could have pose the character a little a-smetric now it looks flat… anyway nice piece and keep it up!!!

#9

her thighs are far to short, beside that nice picture! :thumbsup:

#10

her body looks too simmetrical
you draw a half and then mirror it?
:surprised

#11

I’d agree on the lack of a pose. It makes the whole a lot less interesting. I also think even for an anime character her waist gets a bit thin.

It’s an interesting piece but with a little more effort I think it could be a lot better.

#12

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