building in air

[zoonmu]

hi.here i’m again ! thanks for your watching .although i have a long way to walk,with your support and help i’m not alone,i will try my best.
14th this month is chinese new year,tiger year! best wish to you!

[JJASSO]

hey ! well the concept and idea are cool , but you need to throw in some perspective lines first, the floating rocks and buildings should have some perspective as well, they look just flat right now, colors are ok but the elements look too blury, low res, and the lack of detail in them is making this look sketchy, also the lines in the background city need more definition, what’s the city building details? where are the highlights and the shadows? the reflections? what is made of metal or concrete? think about this when starting a matte painting, this will help you when you plan how to start ,
looking forward to see an improve in this image

[TomasWarren]

Hi Zoonmu,

nice imagination but i think you’re trying to do too much at once with this image. It might be a good idea to find one part of the image you like the most and build the rest of your idea around this, rather than trying to fit many different elements together.

For example, keep the far city and the structure on the right, and work out the perspective of these using persp lines as Jaime says, then work everything new that you add into this perspective

good luck mate

[zoonmu]

hey ! well the concept and idea are cool , but you need to throw in some perspective lines first, the floating rocks and buildings should have some perspective as well, they look just flat right now, colors are ok but the elements look too blury, low res, and the lack of detail in them is making this look sketchy, also the lines in the background city need more definition, what’s the city building details? where are the highlights and the shadows? the reflections? what is made of metal or concrete? think about this when starting a matte painting, this will help you when you plan how to start ,
looking forward to see an improve in this image

great suggestion!thanks for your help. yeah you are right. perspective is a big problem to me:(actually i did some lines as a draft before i start … … …
flat is a same feel to me.maybe is the perspective…what is the best way to deal with the problem?
and sometimes i really got lost in my mappingtime ,adding someting or cut someting …till the end :here is another one ,happy acident ,lol
i will take your worlds “when i plan how to star” thank you again:)

[zoonmu]

Hi Zoonmu,

nice imagination but i think you’re trying to do too much at once with this image. It might be a good idea to find one part of the image you like the most and build the rest of your idea around this, rather than trying to fit many different elements together.

For example, keep the far city and the structure on the right, and work out the perspective of these using persp lines as Jaime says, then work everything new that you add into this perspective

good luck mate

hi tom ,nice to meet you .it must be a little late to reply your suggsetion i hope you won’t mind:)
bournemouth is a admired place and i’m a senior student in a animation school too.you are right ,i try too much at once.to a great exten my material which i search from google,changed my plan my design.that can be a bit of a bind…

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