Bmw 323i, Chrissisco (3D)


#1

Hello All,
This is my first post on CGtalk, just wanted some feed back on my BMW.

Thanks.


#2

Cool stuff, I like it really:)


#3

wow, that’s great… my fav car too… more pics? stats? thanks!


#4

wow, That’s one fine piece of modeling! I think the car is very nice.

To the crits:

The wheels, I don’t like the material, maybe chrome it up, it’s too white.

And the background scene bothers me a bit, use depth of field to blur it. Also the bricks on the ground are to bumpy and to large, I would scale them down about 3 times.

Also I think the render is a bit grey, brighten it up.

Great work, keep us posted! Your modeling skills are very good!

Have fun,

Wybren van Keulen


#5

Good work…
Can we see some wireframes…?

-Tom


#6

Here are the wire frames.


#7

Wire frame rear.


#8

Sweet, the mesh looks very clean nice.

Good work on materials too, maybe the rims can be tuned as mentioned.

Otherwise a very impressive piece of craftmanship !! :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause:


#9

man, you a good ! Great work!:applause:


#10

WOW. This looks real to me.

Shure - one of the best car renders I have ever seen!

Perfect Job! :thumbsup:

Well done :wavey:


#11

What kind of software do you use?

in fact the mesh looks beautifull

Pegasus


#12

I like everything except the black windows. Superbly modeled.:slight_smile:


#13

wow…its really nice.


#14

wohoo!:buttrock:

bavarian engineering at it´s best! really nice model, but i have some crits. the tire-rim looks not original, too smooth.
also, the headlights should have a more reflevtive look. last but not least, the black windows look a little too “knight rider”-style, but i guess you didn´t model the interior, so that´s ok for me :wink:

overall, nice model!

:beer:


#15

Excellent. The mesh looks very nice and clean as said. ++ for you!

I dislike the windows however. Too dark. A subtle tint I think would look better (though seemingly with no interior I dont know how that’d look). I love the 323i so I really dig this model. :applause:


#16

I think your “kidney grilles” are too small - from what I see in the render, but in the wireframe it looks normal…???

Another thing are the tail lights, they look too bubbly and maybe slightly too big.

good work though :thumbsup:


#17

Cool work …

WoWoW …
It seems to be real !


#18

Hello All,

Thanks for all the input! Seeing from the responses I have received, I think I need to model the interior of the car!

I’m also going to put different rims on it as well. I was trying to build an exact replica of my car, but I put new rims on the vehicle and need to change the 3D model to reflect the real one. Hopefully I will have some time in the near future to put all your suggestions to good use and model the inside.

The soft ware I used was “3D Studio Max 4” and the hard ware “Pentium III 550 with 256 Megs of Ram”. The challenge I set forth was to create a realistic car in Max with out the use of any plugins and without using Photoshop for touch ups.

Thanks once again,

Chris Sisco


#19

Digging up some of the classics, please send me a higher res image for the gallery :wink:

You have received the CGtalk choice award .Please feel free to display this image anywhere you like! Keep it up amazing work bud!

upon receiving this award, it guarantees you a spot in the cgtalk gallery hall of fame - which you are now placed

P.S. Please email me @ tito@cgnetworks.com for the .psd file

salud


#20

is this a photo or what! its looking pretty damn sweet!