That is looking really good, theres a few parts where the lip sync looks just slightly off when he says I love you to, the “to” doesn’t feel right. Also when he says “so” as well, please keep in mind that this is just me being picky because I love lip syncing lol The opening when he struggles to say “I” and takes a breath is AWESOME! Also I love when he wipes the tear it feels very natural and fluid, very good work on the animation there. Keep it up
Heres one of my lip syncs you can crit and tear apart if you have the time.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rqs3S0XfyK4