Hi everyone,
Sorry have been a bit slow in replying lately…
Originally posted by 2dartist:

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I really like how this piece is coming along, and hope that you continue with it. I think that one thing that would help would be to fill the background with a mid gray so ~ you always want to try to eliminate the white canvas and work from a mid tone, building your lights up, and your darks down in value. Looking forward to seeing more progress on this!
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afgal,
Good to see you doing figure drawing from life. 
I think one thing to watch (and life drawing traditionally is something that takes just a long time to learn) is the length of your forms. Try stretching / elongating the forms a bit, more than you are presently. This gives the figures more grace and fluidity.
Here is a drawover of how you might break the form down. A really good book I would recommend to anyone interested in figure drawing is:
Vilppu Drawing Manual (Spiral-bound) by Glenn Vilppu
In it, he describes how to break down forms simply into simple shapes.
Here is a drawover of your piece which I think might help:
[left]Looking forward to seeing more of your work! 
Cheers,
~Rebeccak
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