Beauty Of Aged, Andrew (3D)

#4

hi,

thats wonderful…
great loook friend…:thumbsup:

one thing i thought looks different…the map size…their feel is big…especially the far building.

one thing…the window on the far building…top left corner…I dont know what it is may be the angel…but i can see the sky…through…well its a Boolean problem, glass reflection dont know…but i guess that wall is open. Do check that too.

But Final look very nice.
Cheers,

Inxa

#5

nice image indeed:)

#6

Nice, fun lil zine,… I think some flat areas, without so much bump would complement the organic stylee,… kinda looks full of noise now. Also on the alley wall, the texture is a bit uniform top to bottom, how about some rain stains, slightly clear area, layers of finishes.

I really like how the wall extends in ruin at the corner! So hopefully you will be inclined and free to continue a great start.

-Shea

#7

i agree with ls3d that its’ too bumpy and noisy. I think it’ll look better if the values are lowered a little or else Good job on the overall!

#8

Hi all!! Thanks for the vote and a good crits:). yeah, I have to agree for the thing that already mention by all of you, many…many Thanks for the feedback. I think what I must notice carefully for this image is the bump issue.
and Inxa, the window is a reflect texture…but yeah…its kinda odd,hehe:D.
Frenkie, DrakeX, Inxa, Ecleposs, Ls3D and leealex_2005…:slight_smile: I thank deeply for the comment and crits to my image, they all very appreciated and read carefully.:smiley:

#9

:thumbsup: nice!! I don’t english!

#10

nice image indeed:) But I don’t english!:shrug:

#11

good work nice texture and good render it is really good:thumbsup:

#12

excelent work
in my opinion its so sharp and much bump, but still a good work:)

#13

I think the bumpy and sharp is just the right for thät one :slight_smile:

#14

:smiley: :smiley: Thanks all!!! many…many thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate that, I hope I’ll able to produce a better one after this. yours all kind words are motivate me:) !

#15

Beautiful work!

#16

its’ too bumpy and noisy.

#17

this is really impressive . i am new to cg and started learning graphics last month …can you guide with some stuff i am building?

#18

kerstin, Thanks for your comment.:slight_smile:

mimawoai, Yeah…Thanks! I also noticed that problem…hehe.

shweta, Thanks! I would suggest you to take your time study a lor from tutorial form book or net. there also a good tutorial in 3dtotal.com. in that site, I have found a lot of similar tutorial for making a “dirty” scene .:smiley: Good luck.!

#19

Good pict!

(You may use less bump…)

#20

Stunning!! Great style!!

:thumbsup:

-CG

#21

very high bump :frowning: but good work :slight_smile:

#22

Nice work.:thumbsup:

#23

Attila Deak, Thanks for your kind word and suggestion :), I agree with it and should more careful for bump work on my next work. Thanks :).

Clever_Guy, Thanks, glad you like it:).

enterasan, :)Many Thanks for your observation.

ironic440, ;)Thanks for your kind word!