Beauty Of Aged, Andrew (3D)

[Ls3D]

Nice, fun lil zine,… I think some flat areas, without so much bump would complement the organic stylee,… kinda looks full of noise now. Also on the alley wall, the texture is a bit uniform top to bottom, how about some rain stains, slightly clear area, layers of finishes.

I really like how the wall extends in ruin at the corner! So hopefully you will be inclined and free to continue a great start.

-Shea

[leealex]

i agree with ls3d that its’ too bumpy and noisy. I think it’ll look better if the values are lowered a little or else Good job on the overall!

[Androgs]

Hi all!! Thanks for the vote and a good crits:). yeah, I have to agree for the thing that already mention by all of you, many…many Thanks for the feedback. I think what I must notice carefully for this image is the bump issue.
and Inxa, the window is a reflect texture…but yeah…its kinda odd,hehe:D.
Frenkie, DrakeX, Inxa, Ecleposs, Ls3D and leealex_2005… I thank deeply for the comment and crits to my image, they all very appreciated and read carefully.

[NBCROU]

nice!! I don’t english!

[NBCROU]

nice image indeed:) But I don’t english!:shrug:

[darknessbeast]

good work nice texture and good render it is really good:thumbsup:

[DanielVFX]

excelent work
in my opinion its so sharp and much bump, but still a good work:)

[untilitsleeps]

I think the bumpy and sharp is just the right for thät one

[Androgs]

Thanks all!!! many…many thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate that, I hope I’ll able to produce a better one after this. yours all kind words are motivate me:) !

[karanta]

Beautiful work!

[mimawoai]

its’ too bumpy and noisy.

[shweta]

Title: Beauty Of Aged
Name: Andrew
Country: Indonesia
Software: 3ds max, Photoshop

Heya all!!I found a cool reference from painter cd, So…I decided to play more in texturing, just a little project to break my spare time.
this one done in max 6 default scanline render and standard lighting, with post prod in photoshop.

Any feedback are very appreciated here. Thanks for your time.

this is really impressive . i am new to cg and started learning graphics last month …can you guide with some stuff i am building?

[Androgs]

kerstin, Thanks for your comment.

mimawoai, Yeah…Thanks! I also noticed that problem…hehe.

shweta, Thanks! I would suggest you to take your time study a lor from tutorial form book or net. there also a good tutorial in 3dtotal.com. in that site, I have found a lot of similar tutorial for making a “dirty” scene . Good luck.!

[attila]

Good pict!

(You may use less bump…)

[clever_guy]

Stunning!! Great style!!

-CG

[enterasan]

very high bump but good work

[ironic440]

Nice work.

[Androgs]

Attila Deak, Thanks for your kind word and suggestion :), I agree with it and should more careful for bump work on my next work. Thanks :).

Clever_Guy, Thanks, glad you like it:).

enterasan, :)Many Thanks for your observation.

ironic440, ;)Thanks for your kind word!

[Rasyidxtreme]

:buttrock:wedan lah ndrogs…impressive work man…can’t wait to see more of your superb work!..

— cheers —

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