Title: Beauty Of Aged
Name: Andrew
Country: Indonesia
Software: 3ds max, Photoshop
Heya all!!I found a cool reference from painter cd, So…I decided to play more in texturing, just a little project to break my spare time.
this one done in max 6 default scanline render and standard lighting, with post prod in photoshop.
Any feedback are very appreciated here. Thanks for your time.
the shadows look a bit dark especially considering the bright / reflective stone everything seems to be made of. but i <3 it nonetheless :love:
hi,
thats wonderful…
great loook friend…
one thing i thought looks different…the map size…their feel is big…especially the far building.
one thing…the window on the far building…top left corner…I dont know what it is may be the angel…but i can see the sky…through…well its a Boolean problem, glass reflection dont know…but i guess that wall is open. Do check that too.
But Final look very nice.
Cheers,
Inxa
Nice, fun lil zine,… I think some flat areas, without so much bump would complement the organic stylee,… kinda looks full of noise now. Also on the alley wall, the texture is a bit uniform top to bottom, how about some rain stains, slightly clear area, layers of finishes.
I really like how the wall extends in ruin at the corner! So hopefully you will be inclined and free to continue a great start.
-Shea
i agree with ls3d that its’ too bumpy and noisy. I think it’ll look better if the values are lowered a little or else Good job on the overall!
Hi all!! Thanks for the vote and a good crits:). yeah, I have to agree for the thing that already mention by all of you, many…many Thanks for the feedback. I think what I must notice carefully for this image is the bump issue.
and Inxa, the window is a reflect texture…but yeah…its kinda odd,hehe:D.
Frenkie, DrakeX, Inxa, Ecleposs, Ls3D and leealex_2005…
I thank deeply for the comment and crits to my image, they all very appreciated and read carefully.
Thanks all!!! many…many thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate that, I hope I’ll able to produce a better one after this. yours all kind words are motivate me:) !
this is really impressive . i am new to cg and started learning graphics last month …can you guide with some stuff i am building?
kerstin, Thanks for your comment.
mimawoai, Yeah…Thanks! I also noticed that problem…hehe.
shweta, Thanks! I would suggest you to take your time study a lor from tutorial form book or net. there also a good tutorial in 3dtotal.com. in that site, I have found a lot of similar tutorial for making a “dirty” scene . Good luck.!