Beast of Burden - Contraption - raV-Dog

#23

Hey hey!

Twisted - Thats a good idea! I was trying to think about how i could keep just a regular wheel barrow look with the counterbalance thing and i couldnt get any good designs… so i might so something like you were saying there but maybe put it in a rickity old shed or something and have a lantern acting as the sunlight… or a crack in the roof.

Zr0-1 - Always glad to have your post! some “gyroscope-controlled shock absorbers” eh? haha nice…

Thanks for the critique… i’m going to post as soon as i can, probably Monday. I havnt been able to do any work this past week… busy busy :hmm:

Lata

#24

Lookin good mikey! I wanna see more!!:applause: :applause:

#25

Hey hey!

Sorry about the lack of updates… i’ve been trying to finish my demo reel for the end of the month… then its off to try to get my foot in the door :).

If you’re interest in checking it out go to da4.figaming.com/mikeh/

Anywho, heres a quick update… finally.

#26

another update…

#27

lookin coo mikerely. I think the lighting rules looks almost like a brazil render, as for critiqe I think the two mountains are to round and simalar there also should be more randomness.
but you are a Madman.

#28

Chadarely - Haha thanks… i noticed that about the mountains too but no one said anything so i was hoping it would slide… but how could it slide by the chad? haha… i’ll see what i can do.

Ya I like that lighting too… its just a bunch of directional lights in a ball for the ambiance, one directional light thats a little bit blue with shadows on, and one directional light the oposite direction thats a bit yellow (shadows off)… try it out.

#29

All of the new modeling looks great. I love the farm, it looks really awesome. On ecrit about the lighting: You need to turn off the shadows for the blue light and turn them on for the yellow light. Right now your yellow light is your strongest “source” light but the shadows are being cast from the opposite direction. That is most obvious in the farm picture. As far as the mountians I think you could get away with just making them have sharper edges, less ‘worn-down’.

Great work so far, keep it up! :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

#30

Zro-1 - Thanks for the critique man! I can’t believe i never noticed that… wow… not that you pointed that out its so obvious. I guess thats what critiques for :slight_smile: Thanks.

I’ll play with the mountains tomorrow hopefully… and put the village onto the scene… and then its onto the wheel barrow part i guess.

Later

#31

hey hey!

The town is in place… I have to tweek the shadow quality and stuff… so thats what those weird lines are :slight_smile:

#32

Another update:

Water texture and the wheel barrow…

#33

hey mike
looking nice so far…but one question…where’s the beast? Also, you might wanna break up the water…make some big waves. but lookin nice…wanna see more.
:smiley: <------constipated smiley just for you

#34

Jago - I’m not modeling the beast, just the contraption. The bump map for the water gets less and less once its closer to the island… But maybe it needs more tweeking :slight_smile: Thanks for the critique dude!

Thanks for the smiley :slight_smile:

#35

Hey hey, more textures…

#36

more textures…

#37

yo mikey! thats looking wicked i really like that texture

heh i still dont know about the candy red wheele barrow

but anyways

keep up the good work
peace

#38

hey RaVdog
that looks pretty sweet! your textures are pretty…:surprised The only crits i can give at this time are to break up the geometry for the water, because from the far away shot it all kinda looks flat, and the other thing is change the opacity of the water just a tad, cuz right now you can see just a little too much of the island that’s under water. Overall looking real nice tho…keep it up!

#39

Twistid - mmmmmmm… candy…

Jago - the reason for the water looking flat further away is cause its not geometry, just a bump map… but maybe today i’ll make it geometry and see what looks better.

thanks for the critique dude!

#40

It’s getting there… dont worry, the grass will be tweeked still.

#41

Well here it is… the final BoB contraption. Hope you all like it! :eek: I hope this qualifies as a contraption… hehe.

#42

This thread has been automatically closed as it remained inactive for 12 months. If you wish to continue the discussion, please create a new thread in the appropriate forum.