Beast of Burden - Character - zusty

#21

Is the creature that anakin ride and then fall down…remember?

#22

Oh, the creature in the field? Around Lake Como?

#23

Wait, is it this guy?

#24

Trying some harnessing…

#25

#26

Great! I like the originality of your concept and even though it is still early on, I like the harness design a lot too.

small crit: I think the muscle and bone structure need a bit more shaping to them, it seems like he has a lot of inexplicable corners

love to see more!

-Nate

#27

Good point, espaki.
Beginning working on some clarification.

#28

It looking really good zusty. The details are really starting to come together.

#29

:thumbsup: I like it! keep up the good work!

#30

Very original! I like. If the head didn’t look so cute compared with the rest of it, it would look really vicious! A ready-to-pounce sort of look.:scream:

#31

Man! Had a webspace outage this weekend.

#32

A friend (thanks, zach) brought to my attention some anatomical problems, and I’m setting about fixing them. I also had gotten too hi-rez too fast, so i’ve gone back in poly count a bit. Very quick and dirty so far.

#33

like the character very much…:bounce:
the only feed back I have right now is that the harness is too conformed to the bodyin places … the layout of it is fine but it wouldn’t conform to the body in front of the shoulders…they would be pulled tighter…and span from neck to shoulder without coforming!:thumbsup:

#34

Anyone have any suggestions? Still trying to make the anatomy feel right, but still be actually interesting.

#35

Y’all sick of this guy yet?

#36

Oh, yeah, this challenge! I guess this guy is about as done as he’s going to get. I couldn’t think of anything good for him to be dragging. I also don’t have any fancy rendering software, more’s the pity. So, any last-minute complaints or crits? Do tell.

#37

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