beast of burden - character - the chad

#19

I think the arms are too far forward on the chest. Try moving them out to the sides and closer to the back/spine. that might help tie them in a bit more.

#20

this Zro-1 character is a smart person. I totally agree. plus you should add a laser cannon.

ā€“opiate

#21

if something goes wrong, you can allways resort to laser cannonsā€¦ or beer :smiley: :beer:

#22

I agree with Zro too, bring the arms up and out more twords the spine. Also add sholder blades and possibly a rib cage for more detail. What you might want to do is sketch out your characters muslce and or bone sturcture(s), this might help a bit more.

On another note, Chad (great name by the way!), better watch out people might think your meā€¦ >click< :stuck_out_tongue:

#23


this is the arm somewhat fixed im doing shoulder muscles next

#24

Hey hey!

Looking good chad 'ol boy. The arms looking better how it attaches.

The only critique i could think of is that the knee is a little too roundā€¦ I think it needs just a bit of varience in it. Feel your knee, youā€™ll know what i mean :slight_smile: Other than that its looking great man!

Lata

#25


just a update of the inside of the arms

#26


just a head update.sorry it took so long but i went to the warped tour
PUNK ROCK RULES!!!:beer: :beer:

#27

This is looking terrific! Great work so far. :thumbsup:

#28


just a muzzle update and yeah we have nostrils
whew he can breath:bounce: :thumbsup:

#29

ps i feel lonely no one posts on mine.
it would be nice if i got more posts to let me no how im doing and get critique
even a hi would be nice
wooo what a whinny rant sorry folks.
tnx:hmm:

#30

the model is coming along very nicelyā€¦the only comment I have is he seems alittle off balance like he will fall forwardā€¦but otherwise looking great!

#31

hey this looks really good. you might want to add some muscle definition on the neck part, the whole character has a hint of muscle definition except the neck. looks really good so far, keep it up!!!

#32

he will be leaning on a bar that is attached to the cart but maybee i should hay now that i look at it my center of balance is the wrong way tnx

#33

Hey Chad,

I like your dinosaur and have to say that the bone cart rules! Weā€™ve got similar BOBs, so itā€™s interesting to see yours develop alongside mine. :slight_smile: Youā€™re doing a great job so far! Keep up the good work, and donā€™t worry about the lack of comments. There are so many challenges this month that itā€™s hard to comment on everyoneā€™s. :slight_smile:

Steve

#34

Iā€™m sorry the chad, weā€™re you lonely? All you have to do is ā€œknockā€ on my door and Iā€™ll come over and visit with you. J/K :stuck_out_tongue: hehehe Iā€™m such a smart-a$$

Seriously though, your beast is coming right along. I do have a couple crits for you:
I think that the horns on its head either need to be tilted a little back or a little foreward. iā€™m not crazy about them coming straight up from its head like that.
The spikes on its back need to be a bit more random and irregular. They look too simular right now.
Lastly, I really think this BoB needs a tail. I look at the last few pics and it just looks like itā€™s missing something back there.

Just my 2 cents :shrug:

#35


da cart i rule .jokes i fooled around with lighting but it sucks so ignore the brightness.:scream:

#36


Just a close up of the cart and detail.
Im proud of the spine.:beer: :buttrock:

#37



These are my final renders .
hope you like them
The chad

#38

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