Beast of Burden - Character - swag

#1

Hi, here is the last development stage come on and write me some nice criticism
for more pics scroll down :slight_smile:

at the end is a big one (the original jpg is 390k at 1280 x 720)

#2

ok, here is the concept
it was a fat mice natured beast with a small head and of course
little brain

#3

here i have some mesh for u - come on and help me to improve
the beast

#4

This is good :slight_smile: I can see potentail in this one :slight_smile: looks like a flea up close :slight_smile: not uhh not that i dont have any… (ich ich)

#5

#6

so i must work a bit on the leg and the next part was the head
here is a render

#7

hi swag
schöne füße:beer:
ciao
Mark

#8

Hi Mark, welcome to the challenge :bounce:

#9

from behind

#10

Make sure his head is actually conected to the body either with plates over the conection so he can move or maybe leathery skin between them.

Also his tummy’s general curve loogs a little too smoth for somthing with bones and muscles inside (even a shell would be more of s curves kind of thing)

good start keep going!!

Farley13

#11

l_farley13_l :> thx - i work on the Head-Body-Connection and the
abdomen will receive some crease

#12

:rolleyes:
bin mal gespannt wie es weiter geht
wie hast du das neue bild in dein erstes posting reingetan?
ciao
Mark:bounce:

#13

Hi Mark, iam too :wip: (bin schon ein wenig weiter) - use Edit

#14

simple and effective… really nice, like from another planet, bravo!
the kees needs a little more definition, there is no bones here for now…

#15

@ pascal blanché
yes the knees needs some definition i try to get it better :wip:

here is a new mesh i hope u like it

#16

Very cool concept ! Nice render ! keep going man that’s awesome !

#17

Thanks .::STRIKE::. i love ure bob its my fav u know:thumbsup:

#18

one more rendering:cool:

#19

Swag this is a wild BoB your making. I like the egg shape it has. The back and tail detailing is looking awesome. One suggestion I’d make is to add very small thin and useless arms in it (a la T-Rex).

Great stuff man! :thumbsup:

#20

@ZrO-1
sorry but i dont want to give it useless arms i like it without :slight_smile:

iam working now on the beast master :wip:
i delete the belt and want some better anybody have suggestion
he/she/it will carry some wrecked mechanical (piece of space ship, robot …dont know at this time)
come on give me jump start