Very good. The legs need a bit more muscle to them for this kind of look. Although I agree with nunoalex in saying the fingers need more strength to them, I quite like the position and look of them now.
Keep at it! Great stuff. 
Beast of Burden - character - road
road
#21
Yea I’m thinking of changing them altogether…
not sure what to do with them yet… but i agree with you both they don’t look right…
Thanx for leaving crits…
road
#22
here’s a little update…
changed the front feet… I like this better…
seems like they can support the weight…
also added more leg muscle and a slight skin bump…
any crits out there?
enjoy…
nunoalex
#23
Very nice :rolleyes:
But there is something mising, maybe a tail??
Just an idea :lightbulb
:bounce:
ZrO-1
#25
yeah, the front feet look better now. I like the skin bump, nice and soft :). It’s coming along quite well road.
Mandrake
#28
ha… chameleon like beast! The arms are a little flat, but the legs
are good. Good lizard-like corners of the mouth. I’ll watch this
keep going…
road
#29
thanx Mandrake…
I’ll see if i can beef up the arms a little more…
So you mean the forearms?
iC4
#30
I would add more details to the finger/claws and to the hip (don’t know how it’s called at reptilians…)
road
#32
New update here…
getting somewhere… got a lot of work left though…
stubborn lizard…
enjoy…
as always crits are appreciated and welcome…
phil
#33
hey road, Love the concept and the humans pose is great - lots of energy.
I’d agree with ic4, you should add some details in places like: fingers (knuckles, nails, general skin folds.
some ribs maybe,
and maybe turn the tail into something more like an aligators, ie, flattish on top with two rows of spiky things - or anything else - just to mix it up a bit.
Great work, hope u get time to finnish it off.
road
#34
phil:
Great idea on the tail!!! I like that…
yea i am going to spend some time on the nails/fingers…
I didnt’ do ribs because originally i didn’t think you would even see them with the burden…
but i do also agree some skin folds may add alot…
thanx again for leaving your message…
road
#35
another update…
took off what load i had for the moment…
worked on general details…
feet/claws… ribs… tail… etc…
enjoy…
thanx for the crits so far… it has helped…
road
#36
Though i’d better get an update on here so you know I’m still working on this guy…
added a load he is carrying… more details on the beast…
I’m working hard to get done by tomorrow night…
here ya go…
enjoy…
crits are very welcome…
thanx
road
#37
Well here’s my final…
not sure why I’m not getting any responses but oh well here it is…
Thanx to those who have posted crits for me they were great!!!
glad i finished…
erilaz
#38
Just great road! Nice work!
I would have preferred if you hadn’t used the biped object and worked on a model for that instead, but the pose looks fantastic!
Well done!
road
#39
Thanx erilaz…
yea i found cgtalk about half way through the month…
I really wanted a character but just didn’t have the time…