Hi everyone, I tried to take your comments into consideration, how do the elbows look? the face isnt finished and yes the head may need to be larger. Do you think that the eyes work, they are kinda deep in the head would they be able to see correcly? anyway here they are:
Thanks guys -Jeremy- :wip: :wip:
Looking real nice
I’d like to see more padding on his knuckles. They look like the slope in too fast. If he walks on that surface then I’d tend to think that there’s be some sort of pad for protection. 
hey roachie!!, hey you gotta send us some updates of your work, your model was comming along so nicely, oh well, i just wanted to say your work is really good and i hope to see your progress!!
I like your work too. I agree with tubby that you need to post an update! Time is ticking…
Thanks you two. Im gonna update soon, Ill probably be up all night working in painter I forgot about that… ARR!!! so yeah see you guys tomorrow hehe. -Jeremy-:buttrock: :buttrock:
So im modeling like 3-4 things at once and working and going to doing my other school activities. Here is where I am. Tell me what you think. Im gonna spend most of this weekend modeling. The head is going to be extremely more detailed than it is, the back leg, and the torso is gonna be bony/fleshy.
Tell me what you all think, especially about the protruding bone for the elbow area(might continue thruought the mesh if it looks good. Thanks -Jeremy- :wip: :wip:
definately, I really like the bone sticking out! In fact that’s what I was planning on doing, burden being stretched skin with hooks connecting to the soals of the damned! hehe… but to many other things in life keeping me to busy right now, so it’s not looking like I’ll jump in. So, I say, since I don’t get to and you’re doing a great job so far, carry it thru the model I think it will add a lot of origionality and interests to the character. Don’t forget to make a painful look on it’s face, it would hurt to move with broken bonez stickin out, yo!
Wow thanks 
I would love to see some of your work sometime if you could attach a link to some of your stuff Im glad you like my character It is soo hard to find time to work on my stuff because of work and school and other things. How do you like seattle? Its nice to speak with Somewhat local artists. Anyway Im rambling, but I was wondering what you would think if I made it into almost like a primative form of armored vehicle like with some large ribcage bones sticking up on top like bars protecting whatever goods they are carrying and like bones wood and iron armor primarily hanging on legs face and belly for protection (it is large) Just an idea I might make a concept like that, post it and see what sort of response I get from people. Anyway thanks. 
-Jeremy-
I LOVE :love: the details on the elbow! I think that protruding bone design is incredable. I’d love to see versions of that on the knuckles of the fingers/claws and on the knees. Great stuff so far. I really like the proportions of this beast. It looks tough as nails.
Thanks ZR0 Im really liking your BOB entry as well always appreciate your comments -Jeremy-
hey Roach[MXF], you rcharacter is comming along great. havent see an updat for a while so i thought id harass you for some pics:)
Thanks hehe I have been extremely buisy lately and have had no time to work on it. I have to write 2 essays right now 
but ill try to get some time so I can update. -Jeremy-
Been busy lately with school and work. Anyway here are some pics of my rider she will have wings when I am finished and the beast still needs a lot of work. (I am aware she has no hands yet, and feet are not completed either) Tell me what you think.
And I will post a picture with her and the beast soon. Oii no time!!
-Jeremy-
Here is a shot with the not completed beast :annoyed: anyway Im gonna be spending some sleepless nights to get this done. Time to go to work…
wish me luck and crits always welcome. -Jeremy-
yah!!!the girl is lookin good. the beast is commig along too. this is just a suggestion but it would be cool to have her in some other pose than just on his back, like maybe like this. this pic really sucks but i hop ei tshows what i mean, kinda like that but with the support beams totallt exxagerated and bending and with a harness to support the beams, as well as reigns going upto the tower to control the beast. well, this is just a really rough idea that might give oyu some ideas just in case you wanted to change your pose.
