Beast of Burden - Character - rizob

#41

greeatt crits this is the shit im lookin for. well that rebelious part of me came out. i made the head bigger to give him alittle more character. i added a driving seat and levers for steering. next will be a pully system hooked to his legs with chanes so tha driver can yank his leg to get him goin (stubborn bob). i agree about the pots lookin like shit but a man lives on this beast (like an rv)
so he has got a full house full of stuff, i will add small details like that later so i can think about what he owns,sells, what ever.
keep the crits rollin it helps me allot.:wavey:

#42

heres another with some bipeds for size relation

#43

Extraordinary WORK!!!

:thumbsup:

Really LuvIT

the shack´s a very nice idea…

#44

Awww… you took away his cuteness. =[

Anyway, incredible work!:buttrock: I really love it! one question, what’s the huge thing behind the house?

Keep up the good work!

#45

Been following this post for a while now, and it’s really looking great so far :D. As an extra I think it would look very cool to have some oil lambs on the house and beast. Or some sort of strong light source coming out of the house.

About the beast, the muscle structure looks great imo. Only thing that looks a bit weird I think is the tooth and mouth. It looks a bit simple, but you can probally get away with it if you don’t feel like changing it :slight_smile:

Also, the bigger head looks great, nice touch :thumbsup: I’m sure this will give a great looking end result.

#46

Overall the changes are very good. Just one thing: could you please render out one version with a smaller than original head? Pretty please with sugar on top? :smiley:

#47

great crits crew.
paconavaro. you got it man thats what im tryen to achive.

brian faucet: sorry i had to ditch the cuteness for this comp, maybe ill render a pink one in the end:p the shit behind and around the shack is just misc detail for now, i need to make barrels canteens, ya know, life stuff

toxicchimp: thanx bro, the rider is and old chineese guy so i am going to add the steriotipical chineese cart stuff: chickens and stuff hanging from the hut, defenetly lamps and flags. i will rework the mouth area, i was seeing what everyone thought about the head.

zero: thanx for the suggestions ill render one out for ya.

#48

here you go zero i think the smaller head is more sleek and he looks alittle more mean. i ;ike it but i think the larger head works a little better for this comp, iwant him to look dumb and pissed. with this head he looks kind of smart like a raptor. but i would like to hear what everybody thinks. keep in mind, i just scaled the straps so they dont all fit right

#49

Cool, I like this wee fella.

Only thought is wouldnt it need some extra limbs, wether they are arms or wings or something…Otherwise he’d need to use his head alot for ballance.

Just a though, Nice work:thumbsup:

#50

been slackin but heres an update annyway

#51

yeah, the big head does look better. Thanks for posting a test for me though.

#52

Hey! lookin very good man!

Keep it up.

/Hannes

#53

how cute!! (j/k)

Definitely comin’ along, it almost looks finished and we’re barely though half the time given. You are really packing in the detail. The bonier, bigger head helped make it look a lot older. What more now?

-Nate

#54

actually, when i look at it again, it seems like it needs some sort of cords and straps to hold the jars on the back. the big one seems like its going to roll right off. lets see some other angles of it too.

-Nate

#55

good crit nate, al those pots are place holders for detail. this being some ones house, they should own alot of shit. i need to make lams, barrels, chicken hanging(chineese cart theme), and just tones of detail. i need to make the pully system for his legs stil then i will probably change the extra luggage, shit in back etc.

#56

man i am at this forum way to much. but whatever you guys are cool keep the crits rollin

#57

wowowowow:eek: !!! pretty amazing stuff you’re workin’ on there! i love it-especially how you pay attention on modelling very much details! geat!:love:

#58

supacool!!

this gets 5 bouncies:
:bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

they’re all well deserved.

nice detail. Nice proportions. nice personality.
keep it up

#59

Something about the balance seems a bit strange?? Can’t work it out yet. Maybe those barrels at the back do need to be tied down or the shape of the body?? Not sure?? Keep going man…

#60

wow, that’s friggin awesome!! Looking at some of these entries I think that they could add a separate challenge just for texturing!!!:applause: