Beast of Burden - Character - rizob

#1

i cant let another comp slip slowly away. i started this guy a few days ago but didn’t know what to do with him. this comp will be great for him.
hope my image posts

#2

I’m sorry, but models that have been made prior to the start are not allowed . . . you will have to model something new . . .
everybody does, so we can’t let you have a head start . . .

oh and read the rules . . . see where it says

When you begin a new thread please use the following syntax

Beast of Burden - Character/contraption - [your name]

I’ll change it for you . . . no prob there . . . but PLEASE read next time . . .

here’s a reminder to the rules

#3

oooops i messed up im sorry but no problem i will throw this model away and start new. i will probably try something dinsaur like so can can come up with a cool harness and have him carry way to much junk. hey can any one delete my previous pic im new so i must suck

#4

okay so heres a new start. i think i wikll have an old chineese guy living on his back with a tent or house full of junk. huge harness and straps

#5

okay heres a couple more screen grabs. tough to tell proportions but he will be large.

#6

heres a smoothed mesh. pointers would be welcome

#7

and heres a small render. not bad for about an hour

#8

okay heres another update. i started making the owners house
and harness. the creatuer is so large that i am gonna have to connect the harness to the creatures nose rings.(who could handle a beast that big. pointers please

#9

Looks good Rizob-

btw do you have that “welcome to the robb” animation on the net somewhere? you should put that on your site if you do.

looking forward to seeing more…

-Nate

#10

lets see a closeup of the stuff on his back…

-Nate

#11

heres just a small update. still needs alot of work.
by the way every one should check out my website.
http://www.halfthought.com

#12

lookin’ good rizob…nice textures

-Nate

#13

Looking good.

Crit: looks a little unbalanced, like it might topple backwards.

#14

Looking good so far! I like your concept. Only crits are the ropes look to thin, they are like thread. And the feet may need be a bit bigger, doesn’t look like to stable right now.

Lookin foward to seeing where you go with it!

#15

here is another small update. just adding more detail:xtreme:
this comp is getting better every day, glad i can join. please crit is welcome

#16

My only crit is that the house looks really really small. I’d make it much bigger so it looks like it’s almost too heavy for the BoB to carry.

Only other thing is that all those nice textures you are adding won’t be judged :shrug:

#17

lets see a closeup!!!

-Nate

#18

really nice model!!:buttrock: but as zrO-1 said, you don’t have to get rid of those textures but realize that they won’t be judged. so you could better spent your time on modelling. :shrug:

#19

okayy thanks for the crits. as for the textures, i just play with them while i am thinking of other details. it just helps me get a
feel of the style of deatial. i will probably dump them all for the final peice.

kepp the crits commin

#20

good call zro-1 i was going to make the house small and put in alot of detail. but it does look more propotionate when it is larger.
quick update:beer: :beer: