Beast of Burden - character - paconavarro

#1

Crits :slight_smile:

#2

Good muscle definition so far. Feet and toes still need some work but it looks like you just started on that area. Throw up a quick concept sketch for us to compare with.

#3

Updateā€¦ the ā€œdonutā€ on the end is the place were it will be attached the harness

Im going for the toes Crode :slight_smile:

#4

hahah thats a sweet idea

#5

hate to be blunt, but Iā€™m in a rushā€¦
The front legs are attached to the chest too high and are pulled away from the body too far. They need to come in and down.

Itā€™s a good start, sorry I canā€™t stick around and say more.

#6

I love the muscle tone but something wrong with the feet.The eye always notices something that looks a bit strange and you focus on that and ignore the rest. Keep going, what kind of facial expression are you going to give it?

#7

Update!!! :bounce:

#8

Little updateā€¦ I kindā€™a like the ninja stile sandals :smiley:

#9

lolā€¦love the sandles!!
I do think the legs are somewhat out of proprotionā€¦not exactly sure what this guy would look like in motionā€¦maybe try putting the big legs on the back and the little ones on the frontā€¦

times a ticking!!
giddy up!

#10

Little Update!

#11

I agree I think the back legs look a little smallā€¦and maybe also put a harness on him I think those balls would rip his butt ring right offā€¦nice modeling though!

#12

Wow that BoB has some set of balls :eek: hehehe

Good stuff so far. I really love that ā€˜Uā€™ clamp you made to go through the tail. That looks really cool.

#13

Tnks ZrO-1 Im kind of stuck in the chair or any other place to be seated that will be between the balls (LOL).

Bezerker, I think the harness will be something very small, and not very impressiveā€¦

#14

#15

HA~HA~HA~funny !a beast wear a shoes!keep going !nice~nice~:applause:

check out my beast of burden

#16

well concerning the leg problemsā€¦

I dont think its a big problem. The legs look too straight but that can be fixed after some rigging. Its looks like he is standing up too straight. But if you looked at it with the knees bent in and his elbows pointing back in a resting pose i dont think it would look too bad.

#17

Later Ill render the ā€œriderā€ separateā€¦

#18

wow relly nice hope to see more there just samthing wrong with the head cant explain it

#19

Heheh really nice!
I love those sandals.
My only crit for the moment would be to work out some areas of you creature that ar ā€˜sqarishā€™ example the back part that hold the charge looks a bit out of a mold. Other then that, creat concept!
:thumbsup:

#20

Thnks Marc, Teckniel, and everybody whoĀ“s been giving me crits, IĀ“ve been little occupied with other projectsā€¦ I hope I can work a little on the model tonight :wavey: See you