Beast of Burden - character - Manicalavera15


#21

hi man ! thx for the post…sorry for the “cape” actually it s the beginning of the griphon’s wing :stuck_out_tongue:

about the front legs …i m still working on, but the proportion are good…back legs are not competely created …

i ll post another view to let you understand the true form.


#22

One crit I have is with the lower “jaw” part of the beak. It looks like it’s just a plane and has no thickness to it. I would suggest rolling the edge of the lower beak in on itself to add some thickness to that part. I love the rest of the face. It’s looking really great.


#23

Oh and as far as the wings go. I’d start over on them. Try modeling the wings as if you were making arms without hands. Then extrude the back side to add the width needed for the feathers. Right now they don’t look so good (sorry). The rest of the beast’s body looks awesome though.


#24

Mmmm…It looks like to be a great bob! I like the idea of an air creature…the head of ur bob is very,very good.Kmon!show us more!:bounce:


#25

yeah yeah yeah !!!:buttrock:
i m working onnn the moon (huh?)

i explain : the beak : i ll make when i finish the entire body

but you re right… the bottom-beak is still kinda too flexible (do you understand my horrible english)

here a new post ! face of my BoB…
i m working on the wings…


#26

arf sorry for the size of the screen…:annoyed:

another post : low polygon edit mod :thumbsup:
about 6500 faces with eyes (900 per eye i think…)


#27

i m working on the wings…1 700 000 faces for the render…because of stupid meshsmooth level 3 :annoyed:
i m stupid…i kick meshsmooth and make goodest wings !

what do you think of it?:shrug:


#28

Nice and original, there aren’t many flying beasts in this contest. My advice, rounden him a bit, now he’s somehow quadratic,and work on the muscle definition. The contraption could be a net with goblins or some other creatures. He could be a hunters pet, just some quick ideas. I’ll watch your progress :applause: .


#29

yes…sorry …i have forgotten the meshsmooth on the griphon in the last viewport screen posted…:stuck_out_tongue:

thx for your advice ! i m take care of goblins !:thumbsup:


#30

still working on the wings…
scale X2 (oh yes magnific giant wings !)

still some little bug in the wings…i ll clear it tomorrow…:wip: :thumbsup:


#31

GGrrr!!!

That F****** AOL crashed when I posted my last message :annoyed:

It contained something as :

Oooouuuuhhh!!!

It takes forms! :slight_smile:

Keep a look at it, otherwise it could fly away!!! :applause:


#32

geeeeek !:eek:

WINGS ARE VERY DIFFICULT :scream: !!!

mh…i have taken advices (thx ZRo and co :buttrock: )

working on the wings…and i have deleted feather in order to make anothers …
your opinion? idea?


#33

persp. view with begining of new feather:wavey: :hmm:


#34

The new version of the wings looks awesome. I love how wild they are. I think the griphon looks great so far.

Nice work, keep it up :thumbsup:


#35

Just a word about the wings : When I first look at them, I believed seen two pairs but it seems there’s only one pair. What do you thing about two pairs of wings for your Gryphon? This could give him something of… Royal! :slight_smile:


#36

hum…good idea twofy …but the scene will be heavy…

i l ltest this afternoon, promise !:thumbsup:


#37

more details on the wings, cleaning feather…and perhaps i ll can begin the goblins today !:applause:
(after goblins…if i have the time…i ll make muscles and hyperdetailled body on the gryphon !)
but…if i have time…lol…have beginning the cgtalk challenge 4 days ago…:smiley:


#38

Feather wings rule!
:buttrock:
Go see my bob to see how I did :smiley:


#39

i’m on the 3rd & 4th back wings…i have to make another bone to make it organic and not “flaggy” :stuck_out_tongue:

i have created anothers bones on the front wings : two differents styles : feather and dragon’s wings for gryphon’s fan and dragon’s fan !

have to work on the legs…the tail and huh…another thing?

:cool:


#40

little test …i wanna see basic max scanline renderer (test DoF, Blur, fake GI;) ) and make scene beta posture…

p.s : feather make me mad lol