Beast of Burden - character - Manicalavera15

#1
#2

I really like your griphon design. It looks great. Welcome to the challenge, I look forward to seeing your 3D work. :thumbsup: :wavey:

#3

thx i post my mesh WIp in a little time !

#4

English : this is first attempt of the head…I’m thinking about feeling of the beast…kind of furious :slight_smile:

Français : c’est le premier essai de la tête…Je pense au sentiment de la bête…quelque chose de furieux :slight_smile:

#5

English : working viewport…:slight_smile: tomorrow i’ll show my work ont the head finalized and the body !

Français : vue de travail…:slight_smile: demain je montre mon travail sur la tête finalisée et le corps !

#6

English : last render for today in order to see the back.

Français : dernier rendu pour aujourd’hui afin de voir l’arrière.

#7

Hi,

I think your gryphon’s head is too small for its corpse, keep your ratio all over your drawing.

That all…

Oh yes! Burden in french mean “fardeau, charge” :wink:

@++

#8

Your render looks beautifull! I’m impatient to import it ;o)
The head alone is yet impressiant.

#9

We want the body :bounce:
we went the body !!

it’s starting in the good way

#10

English : The body…hum not yet zeb i’m working on it :shame:

But take a look at this new version of the head…:stuck_out_tongue:

#11

English : another thing…i’m working on the charcater…
It’s a gobelin (gremlins !) Hord !!! they kidnapped the griphon from his master ! is it a good idea?:wavey:

#12

thx to my teacher for the idea !
the center-model shows a manga-version
right and face views are final art for modeling : )

#13

Working view… adding some details…
image is bad…argh

#14

I’m working hard on his face…new color to see DETAILS :scream:

#15

This mesh is the kind of thing that make me happy for whole a day :slight_smile:

It will be a pleasure to work on it :applause:

#16

the perfection has a name…Mani15 :thumbsup:
seriously…thx for the posts two

everybody…what do you think about the eye? i have cleared all bug and cut…

#17

Hi ! need some opinon !

i’m working hard on the body (very hard…)

the back s not yet engaged, i m working on the front legs and front body !

Scanline render of max (no brazil)

#18

I think you could add feather on the front body, or will you make this only with texture?

#19

ahem…;huh? feather 'll come with extrude ruleZ…
or if i can use some plug…i dunno yet :shrug:

#20

Hi! I like the gryphon idea! A couple of crits on the character so far. The head has some nice details going in it, but the body is still a little too boxy. The front legs need to be smaller. They’re almost as big as the back ones, which make the character look disproportionate. They are beginning to shape up. Just a little more tweaking! Also, something is happening just behind the head and along the top of the back. It almost looks like it’s supposed to be a cape, but it’s not clear from your drawing or your model. Whatever that is needs to be resolved or removed.

This is coming along nicely. Keep up the good work!

Steve