Beast of Burden - Character - DoDo3d

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hi all
my idea about this challange is some kind of fantasy horse pulling a car (some kind of pharos war car)
the work is still in the WIP version and the idea didn’t complete in my head so wait for updates
need comments ??

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i think you need to make your renders a little brighter…they are very dark, too dark to see or crit anything…

#5

sorry for the dark version of my image
here is alittel update and brighter one
hope u like it?
comments plz
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I like the cart, but the horse looks a bit like a chess-piece at the moment. Starting to look good though.
You might want to brighten up the shaders and the lighting a little bit more… the gamma on my screen is starting to hurt my eyes! :scream:

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Actually discount what I said about the light. It’s not too bad on second glance.

#9

Make it more beast-like! For me it seems to be rather harmless.
And in opinion (on my screen) it’s still very dark.

#10

overall the beast still looks a little unnatural. first of all everything is still too straight and symmetrical (guess that gets better when you add more detail), but most of all the joints look bent quite unnaturally in some parts. maybe looking at a few more reference pictures can help improving that. I also second the opinion of making the whole thing a bit more beast-like. exaggerating muscles to make it look stronger might be one day to do that, but I’ll leave that up to you.

still, a good start definitely worth improving upon - and the cart looks cool too. :smiley:

#11

thx ppl for the comments

@Stange: about the light it’s not the final one it’s just for showing the horse and I make it darker to give the dramtic feeling or the mysterious feeling

@Gollum: thx for comments about the horse I am still thinking how to make it more beast like I might add some kind of wings or make another head (two head horse) …I still don’t know what to do
need ideas

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