beast of burden - character - Davorell

#12

and here’s the base again before the full freakout:eek:

#13

Personnally i prefered your first concept sketch, and your modeling start looks perfect ! :slight_smile: Anyway maybe even with corns, it will be great i’m sure ! Keep going ! :bounce:

#14

Well the first thing that comes to mind that I think you’ll need if your going down the dino road is a long straight stiff … tail (what’d ya think I was going to say you dirty minded perv :wink: :stuck_out_tongue: )

I’ll see what I can come up with as far as dino reference for ya.

#15

Cool! I like it. :bowdown:
Nice job on the back leg too, love the sense of strength it has.
I definitely think the tail needs some serious attention though. :wink:
If you’re gonna put horns in, you need to make sure the carriage can still sit on top, the way some of them are situated, that might be a little difficult.
Well cool though.

#16

Well I’ve tried a few ideas for things on his back.
the horns and even a few stegasaurus type plates,
to no avail, so im now thinking
crocadile type ridges…
and mabey with a bit of luck, I can still keep the burden on his back
I’ve added a longer tail and it does suit,
And I’ve also tried a bit of mapping,
any crits guys?

#17

Lookin’ good!
Maybe some flab or more muscle on his chest? Some teeth and/or tusks? A harness or something? Maybe even a couple of pose tests?

Work boy, work! <Cracks whip>

#18

well heres an update on my bob for now,
As he started out a mammal and then I thought reptilian
now im thinking with the mix I might try a hybrid…

any thoughts guys.
heres a temporary texture
im gonna unwrap the mesh and do a propper job on the bumps later

#19

this mix was a good idea!:buttrock: the only thing that annoys me a bit is that the bottom line of the head and the line of the mouth are parallel. i hope you understood what i mean, otherwise just ask me to explain it better! :slight_smile:

#20

and here with a bit of head tweaking,
still got lots to do,
add a harness and some stapping,
decide on the burden, to be pulled or on his back

#21

yeah, thanks derwolpertinger,
I’m finding it a bit annoying myself.
I’ve been playing around with the profile of the jawline a lot in the last hour or so. that second pic was an update on the jaw one before.
Im trying to avoid a dragon type look from the side and yet keep it mamilian like.

heres a profile shot of the head. it seems to take years off his age though

#22

yeah the secon pic already much better!:buttrock: i’d suggest that you stop changing it now cause it looks good like it is! :slight_smile:

#23

havent posted an update for a while,
where does the time go,
heres a few with the bump maps nearly sorted out

#24

Hey man, great work so far. Here’s a couple crits I’d suggest:
The horns look a bit weird right now. I’m not sure exactly what I’d do to them, but the look off right now.

The mouth I think stretches back too far. It’s kind of like the mouth is too big for the head. The way you made it right now it almost gives the beast’s head a human-like quality. I’d go and bring in the corners of the mouth foreward to around the line where the nose ends. That should make it look more beast-like.

Just my 2 cents man.

#25

Thanks zro, I’m thinking the human quality is a result of the big ape like brows as well as the mouth
I havent actually tried shrinking the mouth that much .
I guess I fiqured at the start that I didn’t really want a horsey, deer kind of mouth,
and so I just went with a big mouth instead.
Suppose i’ll try it out now just before I put his mouth “bit”
( for the harness n’ stuff) in.
and since im going to try it I suppose I’ll the brows could be shrunk right down aswell.
Heres a photoshop, mock-up for the harness

#26

Getting there…
Has anybody got any Ideas, advice for doing the Strapping/ harness?
Im using lofts in max4 at the moment

#27

wow I’ve been hamering away all day,
its my last day on this project, as im heading off on holidays for the week.
heres some up dates,
probably will never get it rigged but I will eventually

#28

and another rear shot,

jeez, wish I had organised this month better as i didnt start the challenge untill
about the 15th and im also gonna miss out on the last week.
well “god loves a try’er” as we say in Ireland
and I cant wait till the next one
hope its a good one,
and good luck to everyone

#29

hey i love that harness you made there! :love: only thing i can say is that you should make it more stable by connecting the strap around the neck and the one on the right of it. and maybe some straps hangin’ down to make it look more leger(does this word exist at all?). so i wish yourself some nice holidays though!!! :smiley: hope to see you again in the next challenge!:bounce:

#30

That’s a nice beast ya got there. The veins are a great finishing touch. Sorry you ran out of time but you can always come back and finalize it. Enjoy your vacation.

If you try you’ll be a try’er…

#31

Great beast you got some good stuff goin on here…
too bad you can’t work on it somemore for the challenge…