perhaps this is better???
what do yo uthink peoples
Beast of Burden - Character/contraption - Mr Mark
Bezerker75
#22
I was thinking maybe something like this! hope you you don’t mind the paint over!! hope this helps…also I like the details you are adding in the neck!
mrmark
#23
im currently working on the head
school is back, which is not good
well heres where i was about 30 mins ago
by no means complete
erilaz
#25
Going nicely Mr. Mark! Such a cute lil’ puppy!
That mouth looks a bit sharp. You might want to round and fatten the edges, so they have some more jowly bits. Ears are starting to look nice. If you’re after a bit of realism, there’s a tiny flap of skin that folds out of the innner ear on most dogs. If I can find a picture to show you what I mean, I’ll post it.
Just keep on tweaking till you like it!
Iguiniz.X
#27
Looking nice man,
Well a comets as usual. …–> check the rear legs they look a bit weard to me especialy in the perspective pic, YOu got a dog at home? wel if so check him out .
I soon reply abouth the other challenge at LuRV but not now it is late an I go sleeping soon.
By and Keep it up, the good work.
:xtreme:
Iguiniz.X
#28
Looking nive man,
Well a cometn as usual. …–> check teh rear legs they look a bit weard to me, YOu got a dog at home? wel if so check hm out .
I soon reply abouth the other challenge at LuRV but not now it is late an I go sleeping soon.
By and Keep it up, the good work. :xtreme:
ZrO-1
#29
My biggest crit on the head is that the eyes are too small and too far recesed into the head. You have to give your beast big puppy-dog eyes 
Also try to get the upper lip hanging outside of and over the lower lip. Don’t have them round into each other.
Just my 2 cents.
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