Beast of Burden - Character/contraption -dfr98

#9

That’s great, but the POV in your first sketch was much better. The low viewpoint is great, gives a better impression of their character. Maybe you could just focus on the creatures and only suggest the contraption?

#10

I love the idea of your little lizards but I agree with puddlefish ( I’m gonna have to start beating him to some of these threads I’m starting to sound like his yes man always agreeing with him :stuck_out_tongue: ) go with the lizard-eye angle its much more dramatic .

#11

Thanks for the feedback guys, I couldn’t agree with you more, I’ll post a new sketch tonight.

#12

Update!

What do you think?

Should I add another lizard like in my second post?

#13

Yes thats my vote, I think the 3rd liz (like your 2nd pic) gives it much more depth/interest. :beer:

#14

go go go ! :love:

looks totally rad ! never give up !!!

#15

Kosher Sammy…awesome…:applause:

#16

Love it man thats much better
:applause:

#17

Lookin good…

#18

Update

I added the third t-rex back in, I think it looks better than just the two.

#19

Whats really cool is how small the beasts are…but they still look as if they can pull the weight…:thumbsup:

#20

Impressive! Love it so far, keep us posted.
:buttrock:

#21

cool style! :buttrock:
But the dinos look quite big now. Perhaps if you scale the close one up (about 150%)? Might add more depth, too.

#22

Thanks for the feedback guys

I scaled the close dino up a little and I’m now starting to add some color, it’s still a wip

#23

Nice…your color is sweet as feet…

(I don’t know what the hell that means):hmm:

#24

Are you gonna model it?

#25

Sorry Jacob I’m working on a rusty bucket model for some other project. Just don’t have the time.

#26

That’s some real nice texturing on the foreground dino. Looks very nice.:thumbsup:

#27

You should add a naked chick in some kind of exotic pose.

#28

Thanks-Gamoron

Final Image

I’m not happy with it. I kind of rushed it at the end.

:thumbsdow