Hello! im new to this board but i like to lurk around every now and then. Im not even a modeler, but i just started as kind of a hobby while im not drawing or painting something… mabye it’ll help get a job in the long run… anyhow!! this is only like the 2nd model ive done, so critique it as much as possible, ive got alot to learn!!
Beast of Burden - Character - burnout
rizob
#7
man this is lookin great, if yiour not a moddler were in trouble, the muscle definition is grand. only crit is the head looks a littll out of character for a beast. make him mean and ugley, i know we have alot of time.
AroundTheFur
#8
i think you could keep that head, just make the mouth a lot smaller, and maybe raise an eyebrow so his expression is curious or something like that. just an idea
Bezerker75
#9
very solid start! I like his big friendly head! I would add the buldge where you have drawn his nostrils and make the top of his skull a little taller like you sketch…other than that…great start!!!
burnout
#11
Hey! thanks alot for the comments guys.
stereo, okay, i’ll think of something on my next update (sometime tomarrow!)
rizob, Thanks! the head is a bit friendly, im not sure what i’ll do with it at the moment, but it’ll prolly stay simple.
aroundthefur, Yup i need to think of an expression for him, it’ll be difficult with such a simple head… but i’ll get something 
bezerker75, thanks alot i added the nose and im shaping the head a bit more now…
Clockwork, thanks, yes a friend also said the girls would dig it hahahaha.
okay, i’ll up another pic tomarrow some time with an added harness with straps, hoops, bolts, and some chains for pulling… thanks again guys i appreciate it!
rizob
#13
nice man it commin out really clean. no crits right know i know you just started. the sattle and starps are lookin good to. i keep an eye on your thread
my bob
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