Beast of Burden - Character - Bezerker75


#61

Very nice job berzeker. The throne idea is very original. An dthe detail of the 2 hanguing bodys is really cool too. I agree with ZrO-1 about the harness and the sticky too skin inpression. Otherwise very good job. I was thinking in the royalty stuff and maybe you could inspire yourself in how asian elephant are dressed for parade and processions.

Cheers looking forward for more :thumbsup:


#62

Love the concept, the hanging dead things give a very nice touch of utility to the bob. :slight_smile: :applause:


#63

:eek: :bounce: …Now I am excited…that is one of the elite beasts of the challenge thus far in a very good group of beasts.

                    Clean and fun, plus the details are very high end, I am very big on details, and depth within creations, and you are giving it the extra mile Bezerker75..............very nice, keep it up.

                 ZrO-1..............Brought up a very good point about the  harness looks like it's just a raised part of the skin..............you should put a  separate piece that is placed on the beast here and there that protrudes out as ZrO-1 suggests.

                  Anyways great job, keep it up, you are one of my fav's right now in a really good field.  :thumbsup: :)

#64

10 out of 10 for modelling but you need to break those textures up. The bump is too high and too even dsitributed.


#65

Thank for explaining how you did you your harness

Your goblin looks good. I really like his hat. And those throgs reminds me at Star Wars.

Keep on going


#66

Hey guys thanks for the coments and crits…I will post some updates later tonight…I think you’re all right about the harness! I started pulling some areas up off the beast! good suggestion! about the texture…well the bump on the beast is just temp…actuall all the textures are temp for the time being…I am trying to focus more on getting the model built to the way I want it! I will probably retexture after that is complete! Until my next post!:beer:


#67

i totally missed your thread - how could I ???!!! This is xlent work indeed! And the only point to crit is really, as mentioned before by ZrO-1, to separate the harnish a little from the body. Well - WOW!


#68

I just want to say that i like your style.
Your BoB is looking very nice.
Can’t wait to see more of them. :slight_smile:


#69

Awww… I like the snug “skin tight” harness… :sad:

But - it’s you’re Bob!

:smiley:


#70

after much diliberation and pulling some areas of the harnes off the beasts skin I decided I didn’t like the way it looked so…fitted harness it is…I will probably just keep adding more stitching and things of that nature…also I decided the piece of harness on his head is actually going to be a decorative cloth (textures to come)…anyway just wanted to throw this update up… he now has more stiching on the harness and a net bag filled with “woggle melons”…much more to do…but I may need to get a new video card soon…cause the one I got now sucks and the scene is getting mighty hard to work with…I have to keep everything low poly and bounding boxes to rotate in the viewports…anyway…here ya go!


#71

Here is a wire for those of you interested!:thumbsup:


#72

Nice work man! (stands and apllause) klap klap kalp!

nice going man now my sugestion is work on the feet and hands :slight_smile: put a little more detail on that part :slight_smile:


#73

The folds in the leather around the limbs is great. Really believable! Get that bump map going soon! I want to see! :smiley:


#74

Exquisite model. Simply one of the best I’ve seen. Great work!


#75

i like your stuff, great work :)…
my crit:
maybe you should do some twicking to leather on the creature,
it’s too fit on the body…maybe.
5 stars


#76

thanks for the crits and comments…just curious is you guys could be a little more specific where the leather would be coming off the body more…maybe draw on the image so I have a better understand what you mean…I tried to pull it off the body in a few spots but it really didn’t look right…but maybe I was just pulling off the wrong areas…please help! I also plan to add more stiching…I think that will help define it more as a fitted harness…anyway keep coming with the crits…give it all to me! mostly dislikes…so I can fix them…lol


#77

i think it looks really cool and everything is neato!
you sure do rock! don’t change anything, wel… maybe add some monkeys. :bounce:


#78

yeap, i mean this:


#79

Don’t touch that harness I tell you!!

This is quite simply excellent.

(edit: Just saw Ila’s pic - my ‘don’t touch’ comment was meant at making it thicker :smiley: )


#80

oh…ok…sweet…thanks…that’s what I was looking for…I think I can deffinately make a few adjustments on that…no problem…hopefully I will get some time tomorrow to add a new update…just been kinda crazy round here! thanks again!

Her Mojo where in PA you from?