Be Quiet Boy, Jimy Carhuas (3D)

#1

Title: Be Quiet Boy
Name: Jimy Carhuas
Country: Peru
Software: LightWave 3D

hello guys, this is my first post in this forum : This work had been modelled in lightwave 3D, I designed it while I was learning how to use the program, I think its good for a beginner.

#2

nice models, but too shiny materials.

#3

I agree, materials are too shiny, but it looks great :thumbsup:

#4

Yeah what he said.

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#5

yes, i agree with others users, but, characters designs are very cool friend!

#6

I think itā€™s excellent for a beginner, very cool Ikaro!
I think that what catches my attention first is not the modelling, but the personality of each character. Perhaps the boyā€™s eyes could have more emotion, but right now there seems to really be something happening in the scene, it makes me want to find out what their names are, where they come from, two thumbs up dude!

#7

at last a really good peruvian work in a long time, and as I can seeā€¦ from a friend!! nice skills Ikaro, awesome characters, keep it up :thumbsup:

#8

excellent work
i love the characters, some nice modelling in here
congratulations

#9

Thank you boys those were my first models, I know they are very shiningā€¦ Im gonna work on it:bounce:

#10

Thank you boys those were my first models, I know they are very shiningā€¦ Im gonna work on it
:thumbsup:

#11

Add scratches to the bottom of the kidsĀ’ shoes and the bottom of the bots feet. Like deteriorationā€¦ add some dirt, to the texture and some bumps to that area in particular.

Also, most machines like these are considered primitives machines, like ASIMO the robot from Hondaā€¦ I mean, add some sort of serial name to itā€¦ in the texture like X2 - 9 some sort of robotic nameā€¦ as part of the model ā€œseriesā€ etcā€¦

Just my 2 cents okā€¦ Great job and continue the good work.

PS: Adding a female-bot to the composition will add a stronger feeling, in my case I would design her like on her knees in front of the little-bot (the red one)

#12

hey very nice work! i like the expresion on the bigĀ“s robot face, the robots itself remind me of some toys i had hundreds of years agoā€¦ buen trabajo! :thumbsup:

#13

I congratulate you, I should confess that when I saw this image for the first time has sworn that they were puppets, very well achieved, the important thing is that they are ā€œaliveā€, thing that it is not easy to get. Very good work for somebody that is beginner. I would only add him an appropriate background andā€¦ done!!! :thumbsup:

Kissessss

#14

:applause: :stuck_out_tongue: :love: :wavey: graciasā€¦

#15

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