B-Movie Entry: Jacek Tuminski

#10

some inspirations…

#11

Jacek - Great selection of inspirational materiel!

#12

Hey Jacek,

Cool and fun concept, like your approach :smiley:
Maybe you cam make the background buildings a bit far, that we can see the top of th buildings and put some sky on the image to gain depth. Only a comment. Good luck and waiting for more updates. Cheers!! :beer:

#13

Hey Ferx…
thank you for your feedback.
i started to repaint my concept (monster is still old one)
will add more details to street in few days… (windows, garbage, maybe some aeroplains attacking the trash minster, some street objhects…etc…)

i did small persp correction.
is that BG buildings ok now? or maybe put them more behind to see more top of the buildings…?

#14

Hi Jacek!:slight_smile:
Nice concept. I think you should diversify the colour. In my opinion the view from eyes of the frog would be better here.

#15

Hi Piotrek.
thank you for your feedback,
your English is probably better then my :slight_smile:

but I am not sure about one thing,

are you suggesting me to put camera lower? or you just saying that last sketch have better perspective?
because my last sketch is not exactly from frog eye persp (i didn’t put any reference objects [like windows in those buildings])so you don’t know exactly how High they are :slight_smile:
my fault.
so … do you want me to put camera down?
actually - monster should look bigger after that.
or stay with this persp?

#16

Hello!
Hehe a sesame street monster from trash bin. Yes you can play with frog perspective in here by lowering the horizon line to give the monster a bigger scale. To gain a similar effect to this: http://www.fotosearch.com/SDA001/toha00022/ Cheers

#17

I meant precisely what Serio is writing about :wink:

#18

i did some perspective corrections and Blocks some objects in 3d …
colors will change many times later :slight_smile:

#19

Hey Jacek,

Cool update, like the new perspective. Agree with Serio about to puting a bit lower the horizont, and perhaps changing the size of one of the two first right buildings, only a comment :smiley:

Nice work and waiting for more updates, cheers!! :beer:

#20

Great setting. It is a bit funny that the setting is so clean right now.

#21

thank you to all for your feedback !!!
agree with the buildings…
i will change them when start do details…
i will try to put camera little bit lower when add a monster.
and i think i need to put this funny horrible monster NOW…
it is look funny empty for now…:slight_smile:
just not sure what technique should i use to model it…
will try something…
thank you for all your ideas again…!!

#22

I moved camera more down like some good people told me…
i blocked the shape of monster …
i want to give the impression that somebody (some man) is inside this big trash (like in low budget movies)…
still messing with colors (looking for proper climate)…
i want to destroy some buildings and add more street objects soon…

#23

Hey Guys!
can i ask you something?

should i create environment to look like (maquette, dummy) for a movie?
i want to achieve really LOW BUDGET feel !
maquettes and monster with human inside.

or more realistic style?

or more painted style?
maybe modern (like Syd Mead style maybe)?

please help me decide~!

#24

#25

arghhhhhhhhhh helpppp giant garbage attack me
super nice vision :slight_smile:

#26

brilliant concept .my suggestion:

blury is orginal ,but hard to read ,someone may tell you fail on image compression or something. If you reduce blur of the trash-man you will lose your concept -solution will be adding 2-3 screeming and sharp persons in front running aways form the monster

#27

thank you JUDZIGN!
thank you Morano !

youare right…i just did one texture (street) and very
fast bricks on the buildings and was tired …but wanted to put some update :slight_smile:
so…i just did zoom blur in PS to hide bad texturing but see some details under the blur.
i think it is not to bad this (motion feel) but… for movie , not for still.
maybe this blur would be good if i would like to finish my work at this stage…
but i want to add a lot of details to street so would be shame to “hide” them back by blur.
you are right…
adding some 3 persons at the front is good idea…but i am not to good with modeling people (faces should be well modeled - scarryed -[sorry if this is not english word])
so…maybe i can do little inverse trick…?
focus on the monster because he is main subject, and than add some people at the front (maybe just white or dark countours, or very blurred dark) just to suggest that people run and i create some empty place for posters texts this way…???
what do you think?

#28

is my colour B-movie style???

#29

ooooooooo !!!
i though 19 of april is the finish :slight_smile: hehe…that is good…what a l.o.o.s.e.r I AM
only 1 month mistake …
ok/…good lack everybody else !! maybe next time…