B-Movie Entry: Fernando Porcel

#221

It´s good to see you decided which composition to finish and I think, it´s looking great! :thumbsup:

Nothing to crit… I will just watch how you continue. :slight_smile:

#222

Fernando - great to see you in render mode, looks like it’s moving along nicely.

#223

Hey Fernando! You’re very fast and its very good so far.
Maybe you know yet, but I’d change the girl’s face.
Anyway, it’s coming a great piece!

#224

Excellent update Fer, things are now coming together real fast, as fast as the final date approaching, but I do not worry, I know you work fast as well!
Vamos Amigo!
:wink:

#225

i am really curious about their story!

i guess the green barbarian is longing for a wife!haha

#226

Simon - Thanks for your words. You are totally right. I think that the squid arm don’t reads good and that is a great issue on the image ( If someone looks the image and dont know the previews never imagine that arm is a squid-arm mutation :D) I choose the incorrect composition hahahahahah and not have any chance with this hahahahaha… :smiley: Really thanks for your support :slight_smile:

Michael - Thanks for the comment and suggestions. You have good points, for sure I tryto make the squid arm more readable and part of the body of the monster. Yes the back hand has a strange position… more for my corrections list :smiley: Thanks again for the great support ! Cheers!

Fernando - Thanks for your words mate! Cheers!!

Semih - Thanks my friend for your encouragement :smiley:

Ralph - Thanks friend!! Hope to finish the image on time. Cheers!! :smiley:

Marco - Thanks my friend. No, I´m seriously slow when I try to finish a image on time. And dont understand the change of the girls face, you are refering the girl of my image or the girl in your concept?? Again thanks for the support!! Cheers!!

Mathias - Thanks kompis for your great encouragement. I make my best to finish this weird image hahahahaha :smiley: Cheers!! :beer:

Magicbrushlv - Thanks :smiley: No, the green creature is the father of the girl, he dont want that she marries with a wrestler… hahahahahaah :smiley:

#227

Working a bit on more light over the two main characters and refine the little ‘ajolates’ that are attacking ‘Luchador’

… uhhh … this image is not working … hahahah but I don’t have time to change my mind… hahaha :smiley:

#228

Don’t give up, it is working it just needs some tweaking. The squid arm may look better if you use less coils and make them thicker. At the moment the girl’s torso looks like she 's being crushed to the size of a pencil. At the top of the coil you could have the tentacle flailing off and ending in a triangular section of suckers. If you then have a couple of other tentacles coming from the squid body, and try to emphasise that the squid is attached to the guy, that will help. With that very dark shoulder it’s not clear what’s going on as regards squid / shoulder attachment. You could have one of the other tentacles grabbing her ankle or something. Anyhow, plenty of time left… Erm… :wink:

edit: Also, of course, if you angled the girl a little it would leave more space to show that the squid is attached to the guy

#229

Nice to see you are putting to good use that speed of yours mate:D .May I suggest one crazy thing ( I liked a lot the previous villain concept: the one with the glasses) what about to add to the ajolote monster the Dr. Muerte goggles to suggest the idea of Dr. Muerte transforming himself into the monster?.

Anyway, good luck mate!!! I know you will be able to finish this on time.

#230

I have to say I really like the new villain face! As it matches the little monsters, it really lets me know whats going on better, its such a crazy scene :stuck_out_tongue:

Cheers bro! Good luck! :smiley:

#231

Simon - Really thanks for that great suggestions :smiley: really cool help. You open my eyes hahahahaha :smiley: And I don’t give up, that is for sure, I fight till the end … like “Luchador” hahahahaha :smiley: Thanks again for the great support. Cheers!! :beer:

Octavio - That idea sounds really cool. I give a try for sure. Thanks for the encouragement. Cheers!! :beer:

Aaron - Thanks for your kind words and glad that you liked the new make up for the villian :smiley:

#232

Defining a bit more the horde of little mutant ‘ajolotes’.

The end of the road is far yet … and only 48 hours to finish …

#233

Power to the Horde! hehehe

…I know, but that’s only 48 hours! this is getting tight! :argh:

#234

Looking good Ferx!! I’m sure you’ll get it done in time dude, just keep at it a little longer.

#235

It’s coming along beautifully. I can see you making great progress already

#236

go Fer go!!!

:wip: :scream:

this is looking great, the only thing that I don’t like so much is the girl’s face, it looks too manga for me, but that’s just personal I guess, so don’t listen to me and keep going!
ánimo con el último esfuerzo!!!

#237

Your work is very good!
Hurry up to finish! and good luck!
Hope you visit soon my post

#238

Thanks guys for your kind comments :smiley:

Aaron - Thanks mate !! :smiley:

Paperboy - Thanks my friend… I´m working hard :smiley:
Mark - Thanks buddy for your great support and encouragement :beer:

Fer - Thanks tocayo. You are right… too much manga on that face, I change it for sure :smiley:

Miguel Angel - Thanks mate !! I´m a bit on a hurry with this but promise to visit your thread :slight_smile:

#239

Ok, I try to make more readable the squid arm. Change the pose for the girl’s legs and show up a bit the arm. THe perspective of the legs drag much attention and think the first thing to read in this image is ‘Luchador’, because this I flip the image, but still to make a lot prominent the ‘luchador’ character.

Perhaps in the end this image can function well … hahahahaha… still figthing … uhhh and I have a bit flu… cant be possible… hahahaha… no matter I’m work to finish this… ;D ( some tequila can help… hahahahahahahahahaha)

#240

That’s more like it, much better. Maybe have her hands poking out horizontally under the tentacle. You could probably rotate Luchador to the right a bit too, to emphasise the action.

Heh, I got a cold too, been drinking Lemsip today - no tequila here…