B-Movie Entry: Dan Naughton


Superb job Dan. I really enjoyed watching it. All the best in the Competition! :slight_smile:



Way to go, man! This is a stellar entry! Oh yeah, this is Edan. Best of luck! It looks great!


Thanks Everyone. I’m glad you enjoyed it. As for the voice. Yeah…It’s my voice and it’s not good. Sorry you had to go through that. Hahaha.


UPDATED: After a few comments from the forum I decided to change the trailer and shorten the making of. I think they’re much better. Enjoy Alien Invasion’s final submission.

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oh yeah :slight_smile: sound is so cool now!

I knew from beginning you will do realy nice piece. Its simple, funny and shots are great( i like shots most :slight_smile: )!


Thanks, the sound really helps. Plus no more terrible voice over. hahaha


I’d like to reiterate my last post, the robot voice is what is rough around the edges. The old voiceover was fine. As a matter of fact I liked the old voiceover. It had a B-movie feel to it.

The robot voice is very distorted and really hard on the ears.

Also the new version has a weaker ending for the 30 second trailer. We see clips of things then it just stops playing. I can’t remember any issues with your older version (maybe the older voiceover helped with that?). In the newer version you’d have to do something like shuffle the robot shooting clip to the end of the trailer and make him fire at camera, or put in the plane crashing and cut there. It needs to end on a strong note.

You can totally disagree with me! I just didn’t want my opinion to be misunderstood :wink:


Good stuff, I like what you’ve created, great styling and look to it all, looks mint!
Good luck :wavey:


Great comments. I wish I had more time to make the changes. I do appreciate your comments. Thanks:D


Man believe me your work has to be a film…Excellent story…Very good narration…
Amazing images…Animation what can i say…I love it…

Congratulations.Maybe its time to make a short and believe me you have one fan from Athens.



Your story is feelable in your movie, this is what i like with your lighting.
Maybe with more dynamic cameras and characters, you would have released a masterpiece.
Very nice entry:thumbsup:
Good luck jabadan


Great film !
I love how you take the frame and the camera movement
very cinematographic. i like the music too. It give a cool Tim Burton-ish
feeling to your film.
Excellent job !


Great work man! finally I could see, was very curious to know how been the final work.
congratulations and good luck!


Thanks for the comments everyone. Glad you enjoyed it.


Amazing story and directing. Top movie.
All the best !:beer:


Thanks. This was a fun project and it’s getting me into doing more shorts.


I simply enjoyed watching this!


I guess the competition was too tight for them to choose a few winners. Please continue your amazing work. Your entry was a joy to watch. The sheer amount of quality and work you have put in so less time is absolutely inspiring.


Yeah, Dan sorry you didn’t win but your entry was among my favorites! :thumbsup: Keep up the good work!



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