I’d like to reiterate my last post, the robot voice is what is rough around the edges. The old voiceover was fine. As a matter of fact I liked the old voiceover. It had a B-movie feel to it.
The robot voice is very distorted and really hard on the ears.
Also the new version has a weaker ending for the 30 second trailer. We see clips of things then it just stops playing. I can’t remember any issues with your older version (maybe the older voiceover helped with that?). In the newer version you’d have to do something like shuffle the robot shooting clip to the end of the trailer and make him fire at camera, or put in the plane crashing and cut there. It needs to end on a strong note.
You can totally disagree with me! I just didn’t want my opinion to be misunderstood