Around the table

#1

Here’s a book illustration.
I did this in about a day in Painter with some final adjustments in PS.
Hope you like it. :slight_smile:

#2

the giant looks so likeable. :slight_smile:
the man’s, who is next to the giant with the pipe, shoulder doesn’t fit with the other one.
the blonde man’s (on the right side of the table) arm is too short and his hand looks weired. The perspective of the face doesn’t fit. you should reduce the forehead of this guy. the glasses on the table are crooked.

just some little mistakes but nice drawing.

#3

being that there is a man the size of the bar, there stands reason the man reaching is a dwarf or something, so his arm would be shorter, and may appear out of normal proportion.

but anyways, I REALLY like this, tons of atmosphere and interest, really good, would be interested in seeing the book

#4

Thanks! :slight_smile:
cr0ss: You’ve got some very good points (eventhough I disagree with a few of them ;)). It’s easy to get blind.
Anyway, I was told straight after I posted this I’ll have to remove a few adult-things (ashtray, cigarettes, etc) since this is for kids. So I’ll probably post a PG-version soon. Hehe.

#5

oh i like it!
great atmosphere!
:thumbsup:

#6

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