Thanks Aith, winning put some pep in my step…
I really dig the darkness of the monster you’ve got growing here and I sense the direction you’re heading with the girl… I’d say for the monster, his strength at the moment is that he is not just gnarly but also a bit gross… He looks as if he partially doesn’t want to be alive… as if he’s in pain. It’s great and definitely something worth enhancing further in the character. If anything I’d like to see more grossness about him and maybe a bit more detail. I really dig his tiny eye
Our little ‘sweetheart’ has great facial proportions and I dig her hair too. Her right arm looks a little forced in its pose and her overall pose kinda just looks like she’s pasted in… It doesn’t read totally clearly. I’d say she should be clearly doing something. It looks like she’ll have a pair of headkicker boots on which would be great contrast for her. The classic red raincoat is working for me too.
For my reel, my main buzzwords are unique, stylised, contrasting and memorable. Hopefully that helps a little with understanding my end of this
Overall this is a surprising interpretation for me and I am defintely curious to see where it’s heading. I’ve got a bit of a backlog here of marking and work so there’s no hurry to finalise anything on my end but your piece is definitely looking like something I’d like to interpret in 3d Aith:beer:
Here’s a lookin at another great artists piece I’m working with