Ah ty for the feedback Alessa,
I’m doing so much drawing these days to the point thats its affecting my grades in school to iron out my porportion problems, I read so many drawing books but its the prac thats the most help i find. I try to apply the rules but they dont work as good as just takeing my time and looking, measureing. ect. Im starting to take more time, draw slowly, until i get the proportions down, then go back to my gestures.
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