Almost Done, Landscape, Illustration


#1

Hello, got new peace, well its kinda done but i would like to get critique that i could push it further.


#2

Can’t help you as much as you’d expect, but i think that you still have the same problem people mentioned in your tree on cliff edge, the brush texture repeat are too noticeable.
Look at the front rocks ( left most three ones). Repeat is very brutal there, needs mor randomness. The one under sheep is better, but could use a stroke or two to randomise texture too. And last but not least, imho sheep needs more work in terms of anatomy. head and feet look off. Other than that a very nice and inspiring picture with beautiful mountains ^^/


#3

Agreed. The way you mix fine detail and very obvious brush marks with digital artifacts doesn’t look good. Try using brushes that create more random and organic looking brush marks. You should also try traditional painting if you’ve never done it, so that you can gain some experience in how natural brushwork is supposed to look.