I’m working on a personal project- a sort of abstract composition showing a messy collection of items from different eras, mostly electronics and other random paraphernalia. Currently I’m working out the layout in Maya and I have a lot of items in the scene but something feels missing. I think the image doesn’t quite have a good focal path and adding more items won’t necessarily change that. I’d really like some general critique on the image as well as any suggestions on how I can give it more oomph. Thanks very much in advance!
Note:- This is still a WIP so the models are yet to be refined and I haven’t done the texturing. I thought the pink monotone colour scheme fit the aesthetic of the piece in the meantime but it will likely change.
Abstract composition WIP (feedback needed)
Ivie
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