A woman's gaze (12 full WIP images). Please Critique Results


#1

I am not sure whether or not more detail is needed, please critique.

Programs used: Adobe Photoshop CS2
Time: Way too much to be noted

Step 1:
http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/4346/step19ti.jpg
Step 2:
http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/1112/step28ob.jpg
Step 3:
http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/796/step37qj.jpg
Step 4:
http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/3491/step46qa.jpg
Step 5:
http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/5366/step52kp.jpg
Step 6:
http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/4541/step63ry.jpg
Step 7:
http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/5539/step74du.jpg
Step 8:
http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/7831/step84kl.jpg
Step 9:
http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/119/step91pu.jpg
Step 10:
http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/3681/step109uv.jpg
Step 11:
http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/9829/step117hm.jpg
Step 12:


#2

really excellent!!


#3

Beautifull.
Although the left eyebrow (her right) looks a bit out of shape.


#4

That’s nice. It reminds me of the potraits made during the renaissance. Good lightning and values. But in my opinion it’s in need of detail. Too smudged now :slight_smile: Try adding more detail to the eye area coz that’s the focal point of this painting. Try eyelashes and more intense reflections.

Nice work! It’s going to be great! :slight_smile:

-JJ


#5

Thank you, that is what I have fixed as well, much appreciated!


#6

Great picture! Lovely tones. It looks quite a lot like Anne Hathaway.


#7

Yes sir, that is correct, she was my reference image to this painting, Not that picture but one of a similar pose I wanted to paint myself and add my own vibe and feel :slight_smile:


#8

looking good! perhaps it needs some more texture around the eye and on the lips.


#9

Are you sure you posted the pics in the right chronological order? Looks like you applied an oil painting filter to a real picture

Then you painted it over and over. The hair on the right side of the very first picture shows the artefacts that are a result of the filter. Sorry, but … you know.


#10

Did you use the Painter IX.5 underpaint tool on this?


#11

I love luminous stuff like this, now I’m gonna have to look into that tool ^^…

very beautiful, I would personally define a few details like the exact curvature of smaller parts like eyelids and nostrils. Just because I guess. :slight_smile:


#12

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#13

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