A Quiet Corner


#1

Before i throw this into Finished Works. Let me know what you guys think. This is my first real Architectural Project.

Thanks.


#2

Hi Neeno,
I like the stairs. Nice modeling job! It might just be the film grain, but I think the textures look too similar and could use some contrast. When I look at this scene my eye always seems to stop under the table. Maybe try playing with the lighting, shadows, camera angle, object placement a little bit.


#3

Hi Neeno,this is a nice work mate.
About critics I agree on the fact that textures can use some work yet and I think
the light is too strong in some points.
Keep it up.


#4

Wasn’t this over in the 3dsmax forum about the table cloth?

What ever happened to the table cloth.

DOF is way too strong by the way.

Cheers
Gerd


#5

thanks guys, as i do want to get better in this area the crits are most appreciated. All the crits are positive as this image is complete i will apply all crits to following arch viz works i complete.

The table cloth just didnt suit at all mate. I’ll add him in another scene some time soon.

Thanks again.


#6

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