The freighter had just left the upper atmosphere…when suddenly!
Suggestions on making it a little better? i need to work on the turret, cause im sure you cant even tell thats what it is…and im sure you couldnt tell the orangeish blob was suppossed to be something inflaming…i need to do a few touchups on it.
Nice space scene. But criticising yourself 
Thats … you know what.
First, i cant tell if its a spaceship or a chunk of melted metal drifting through deep space.
Then, i would brighten up the planet in the background a little bit, a “night side” rendering, where you can see the citys as bright spots sure would look cool. There are hi-res (hiiiii-res) images of earth available at nasa website somewhere.
The rings really look cool, especially the shaders used for the balls is fine.
C’mon, show me an update!
P.S.: just found the link, its http://www.visibleearth.nasa.gov/
is that the BORG… Crits are the same as the rest…
heipei: hey thanks for that link, I needed that for a upcoming movie company that i’m working with to create their compny identity…
nice those balls are confusing me, are those visible lights that you used for the big read and yellow spots?
pretty nice and good to see a fellow C4Der posting.
CINEMA = Can Intimidate Newtek Especialy Maya/Alias wavefront
HAHAHA!!!OMG!!!
Intimidate Alias/Wavefront?
Thats too funny…
Especially when you dont how to spell especially…:rolleyes:
Kotayus…There is no sense of scale in this image…good work though,keep at it.
Well, I always like a good 3D space scene. Overall, i think this is a really cool idea, but it could use a few tweaks so the concept comes across more clearly. I think the spheres and the gaseous glows look really good, I dig the concept alot. lemme toss out my thoughts
A starfield would be pretty helpful.
Make the planet and moon more noticable, ie turn the light source so we see more of the planet surface.
Move the frieghter / light thingie more to the right so they’re not overlapping the planet.
Make the frighter look more like an obvious … freighter :hmm: ok well I guess thats not too helpful but its just that the ship doesn’t look like a ship, it looks more like a flying square wasps nest.
definitely keep going with this idea, I think its got great potential.
The space scene looks pretty awesome, especially the floating balls arount the freighter. Just one question what are they?
Just one comment, I think that you should make the ship look more like a ship with rockets shooting out of it to make it move and some sort of windsheild thing.
Nice work
I agree with the previous crits. Ship needs more “ship-like” characteristics to it. I too am confused by what I am seeing. May be primarily due to bad composition. Definitely move the ship to the right more. All the action is happening dead center and that is too much for the eye. --Interesting concept, keep developing it, I see a kinda battlestar galactica thing going on!!
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