2d : Comic Pages

#1

I finally have the Wayfinder homepage up and working. I think all is well. You can check it out here.

http://www.lorestrome.com/spaceopera/main.htm

Let me know what you guys think. I’ve been squeezing in a new page every 4 or 5 days, between paying work. I know the page quality isn’t up to my usual par, but I’m doing it for fun and for tte love of the craft. I don’t have time to make them super polished since I’m not getting paid for it.

Our primary goal is to finish it, and have pages that looks awesome, ,and go back and the begining pages don’t. You know, ,to see how much we’ve grown. All of the art was done by me, personaly.

Thanks, have fun. =]

#2

Oh well, who am i to criticize your work? Besides being a comics book fanatic, i know nuttin of 2d painting … but … here it goes:

Focusing on this page, there r mainly 3 things bothering me:

The veins on the frog-like guy’s arm.

The holes in the first pic brother’s forehead

The teeth on the same guy.

Overall, since i went seein all the book u have till now, i think it mainly misses background in all the shots, and that is my bigger crit. I understand u don’t have the time, but it would be really worth to put a bit more work on the background of it all.

Anyways, its a great job u doin here. Keep it up till its done! I’m signing this to see it finished :wink:

#3

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