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  03 March 2005
Master and Servant 2D Entry: Atle Mæland

Atle Mæland has entered the Master and Servant 2D.

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Last edited by am7 : 05 May 2005 at 05:20 PM. Reason: Update
 
  04 April 2005
Concept Sketch: Dragon master



After having some ideas and concepts about a little girl and robot/mech I discovered that other had the similar ideas. So I started on some new ideas, and this is the result.

The idea behind the image is that the "puppet master" controls two dragons with theese magical threads, I have still not sketched in the second dragon though. I see some space limitations there, could be a problem.. but then I just have to MAKE space :)

Good luck to you all!
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  04 April 2005
magical threads eh?? i had a similar idea,not for this challenge,but for a story i'm making.

anyway great sketch,i can just make it out ,a guy on top of the dragon.i luv the guys fingers haha.

i'll be waiting for more.
 
  04 April 2005
Concept Sketch: Dragon master - Concept WIP2



So I arranged a dragon that is closer to the camera in the front. The front dragon has no wings, and is a different type of dragon from the other (moves more like a snake in the air). There is a reason why I have not sketched his left hand btw. as you can see his mouth is wide open, and I plan to make him spit fire. So no need for his right hand.

Otherwise I notice that I have forgotten to sketch the dragon in the back's left right hand. Will fix that later.

Any comments on the composition of the image? Perhaps I will try to make some new thumbnails of this from other positions in the same poses however.. We'll see what I have time to do. Overall I'm pretty satisfied with the sketch.
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  04 April 2005
i'm satisfied too looks great
 
  04 April 2005
good concept sketches dude. i like the poses of both the dragons and the human character.

Goodluck,
Archie
 
  04 April 2005
looks good am7. very nice concept. and since you helped me. lets see if i can help you.

-with the figure foreshortened as is, should the dragon placement be reversed. as in the side of the master rider coming forward should be on the dragon most forward. jus seems odd he is coming towards us on the recessed dragon.
-not sure what to do with the wings...just keep them on which ever dragon is in the back like you have. plus, i would like to see the serpentine dragon body a little. keep both dragons in fluid motion together. they are servants after all....and he is in complete control.

hope this helped. a little if at all. looking good. i'll check up on you later. goodluck.
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  04 April 2005
Hm, dragons, always interesting to draw, jet never boring. I like them, thou I think you should make them more scariier (maybe wider open jaws, and more sharp teeth). It's fine thou, keep it up.

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  04 April 2005
noob!, arc80: thanks!

misledtomisery: Yep! I had already flipped the "master" controlling the dragons horizontal, since I discovered the same thing! I am however very grateful to your comments about the serpentine dragon. I will try to define the movements of that dragon better, trying to balance the flow of the other dragon! Keep thoose critism comments coming people! it really helps.

THE wizard: yep, I kinda agree.. both dragons are kinda passive atm. However since it's a sketch I will develop further sketches on details on how thei'r appearances may look. Same goes for the human master controlling them. So they should soon have some personality, either more scarier or more mystical, time will tell!
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  04 April 2005
Concept Sketch: Dragon master, concept



So I've changed a couple of things as you can see, I also did put a simple grey shading on my sketch in order to be able to read the silhouette of the image better. I will start doing some concepts of the character next.
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  04 April 2005
Concept Sketch: Dragon master, concept



Oh, a friend of mine commented on this. That the composition of it worked better the way it was before, so here is a horizontal-flipped version. I kinda agree with him. :)
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  04 April 2005
yep looks better flipped,noice!!!



keep it up!
 
  04 April 2005
Nice concept, dude.
Love the way the master is almost sky surfing atop the dragons. Particularly like the stylistic way you deal with the foreshorting of the arms and hands.
(oh by the way, thanks heaps for the comments you made on my illustration!)
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  04 April 2005
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very interesting sketch, nice figure by the way, keep it up!


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  04 April 2005
I agree, this composition is a lot better. What's going to be at the background?

cheers,
Archie
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