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Old 10 October 2003   #1
Character: Oriental Beauty



Together with Marc Müller Im planing to create a couple of panels
of a comic in an oriental kind of style. This is the first approach based on sketch Marc did.




this is the sketch...

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Last edited by Franz : 10 October 2003 at 12:24 PM.
 
Old 10 October 2003   #2
wow i like this style a lot, and the contrast is very nice. im glad to see a character like this, slightly stylized. youre movin in a direction i like. drapery is also nice =D
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Old 10 October 2003   #3
deep and fine

Hi Franz!
The Picture looks great. I like the background with the shlightly paint strokes and the contrasted dark floor with the abstracted light. It brings a lot of deep into the picture.
Go on
 
Old 10 October 2003   #4
Aroundthefur and marco, thanx for your comments.
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Old 10 October 2003   #5
What a work Clear and nice!
 
Old 10 October 2003   #6
Wow! Fantastic colors n light/ shadows! damn man...its slick! only crit is taht i find her legs r a lil short/ small...Well..mayb its just me...:P Nice work!

Cheers!
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Old 10 October 2003   #7
there's something wrong with the hand that holds the bottle thou
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Old 10 October 2003   #8
I do like it but the body looks like it will snap, and the hand is a bit undefined.

Overal a good piece.
 
Old 10 October 2003   #9
Very cool. I like how you played with light.
congrats with the plug
 
Old 10 October 2003   #10
Quote: Originally posted by rebo
I do like it but the body looks like it will snap, and the hand is a bit undefined.

Overal a good piece.


Agreed.. I like the style and way that it has ben drawn though.. I will say that she does not look particularily oriental
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Old 10 October 2003   #11
It's good, I particularly like the contrast and colors, but I have to agree with the others about her proportions, as well as her ethnicity. She looks very caucasian (I would say european or american) right now because of her atypical facial features and hair.
 
Old 10 October 2003   #12
very nice pic, great look and style. my only concern is with the proportion of the girl, based on the size of her shoulder width and upper torso i would have to say her legs are much too short. the upper torso is really nice but once you get down passed the breasts it seems odd. could just be me though.
overall an attractive piece.
cheers, tav
 
Old 10 October 2003   #13
Hhmmm....nice job, it has a very nice style to it. Only a couple crits...

There are some anatomy problems here. The intersection with her left flank and rib cage is a little off. Check out some skeletal and muscular charts to understand what's going on under the skin. Her left hand kind of looks like a bear claw. Just pretty muddy. Her balance is also off. In real life, she'd probably fall over, maybe pull that left leg back a bit more, for a more sturdy base. That's it, can't wait to see more!

~Zach
 
Old 10 October 2003   #14
very nice...

but... beside already mentioned critiques something about her face bothers me... not only she does not look oriental... but her expression...

i just covered some parts to see what bothers me... and yes, we have a winner... it's mouth..

with few things fixed this will be really top image... excellent work...
 
Old 10 October 2003   #15
amazing

thats is an amazing pic ,,i really love it ,, the whole atmosphere is nice..greatwork..

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