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Old 03 March 2011   #1
Cool Dominance War V - 3D - míreanna goidte - Goddess of Lost Items

The Goddes of Lost Items... When you lose it she owns it! If you turn your back, she takes it... Forever... And never lets it go...

first time doing dominance war so wish me luck
 
Old 03 March 2011   #2
my back story


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Old 03 March 2011   #3
my referance sheet


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Old 04 April 2011   #4
here is my first sketch

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Old 04 April 2011   #5
this is my second sketch a more creepy version of it

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Old 04 April 2011   #6
this is my third sketch... looking better but I might try fooling with some new ideas now...



please right click and then press view image to see in full detail
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Old 04 April 2011   #7
I have gone back and done some silhouettes lol shgould have done that earlier

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Old 04 April 2011   #8
nice idea, it could be from terry pratchet.
this explains were all the missing socks are gone.
keep the teddy
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Old 04 April 2011   #9
thanks Picaboo, I like the teddy too
I need to get more of a solid visual story into the character...
any crit is welcome as I am only a student studying at AIE melbourne and am still learning
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Old 04 April 2011   #10
I like the idea, very creative
But you should try to give her a good pose, even now in concept phase. It's hard to judge your concept because her pose looks really heavy and not like a woman.
And don't make her a warrior like in the bottom right, personally I really like the concepts with the sticks carrying her stuff, the teddy and maybe the hat too.
Reading your story she is more like a crazy naive girl in a womens body (which is very cool!) and an assassin (stealing stuff, slicing careless people xD)

The more I think about your concept the more I like it. May be even one of my favourites
Just try to play more with her pose and try to show her character.
Wish you the best!
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Old 04 April 2011   #11
Totally creative concept, it's good to see you have a lot of ideas floating around in your sketches. I agree you should play with some posing ideas. If you're unsure of your own posing sketching abilities, I've found doing a quick trace over of a photographed pose can help to establish the stance, then you can add your details over that.

keep it up
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Old 04 April 2011   #12
thanks a lot guys for the crit!
I will work on the pose and try my best to get her looking right!
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Old 04 April 2011   #13
good way

yes is a good idea, just a tip, being a femenine model can give you some aditional expression if you look the side view too, femenines curves suggest a lot in armors.

keep it up and show more!

PEace.
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Old 04 April 2011   #14
I'll make sure I do two views then lol
thanks for all the support guys
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Old 04 April 2011   #15
my first version of my final concept... yeah it is small but I will be blowing it up and adding more detail sorry for the delay had things stopping me working on it

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