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Old 11-02-2010, 04:05 PM   #1
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Robot Walk

I'm currently learning the ropes of animation and I've recently made this walk cycle for an assignment for school. I was wondering if I could get some feedback on it, on what I could push further or perhaps ease up on.

Here it is - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yzJttWPSZR4
 
Old 11-05-2010, 03:20 AM   #2
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would it help if I got playblasts from different angles?
 
Old 11-05-2010, 11:28 PM   #3
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One thing I noticed was that your timing appears to be a little awkward. The legs on its right side seem to be off the ground at the same time. If you're trying to make it walk like a dog, the opposite legs are off the ground, not ones on the same side. If its supposed to be like a crab or something similar, the legs move one at a time.
 
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